To: Axel Geirsson From: Batman Date: 10/30/2013

Dear Mr. Geirsson,

I received t e memo t at !o" sent re#ardin# t e $20 %ro&Tec T 'rod"ct line. T ere (ere some desi#n )la(s and )ormattin# errors in t e memo t at I corrected.

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I ave attac ed t e revised memo to t is email. I) !o" ave an! ."estions a*o"t t e c an#es I ave made to t e memo )eel )ree to contact me.

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