:%2 ;#41%41 <1&4'&"'=,>6 8+,1 1?% @#A0B%1% 1%/1 #$ #4B2 1?% "%B%*&41 0&"1, #$ %&@? ,1&4'&"'C D!.6 E F G ;;<<C.8HI8+1%"&@2C8CJCJ Bemonstiate commanu of the conventions of stanuaiu English capitalization, punctuation, anu spelling when wiiting. ;;<<C.8HI8+1%"&@2C8CJCJK 0se commas in gieetings anu closings of letteis. ;;<<C.8HI8+1%"&@2C3CJCL With guiuance anu suppoit fiom auults anu peeis, focus on a topic anu stiengthen wiiting as neeueu by ievising anu euiting. 8%,,#4 MKN%@1+*%6 3?&1 '# 2#7 O&41 ,17'%41, 1# P4#O &4' K% &KB% 1# '#Q D!.6 ER S F G Pioofieauievise expositoiy wiiting: peisuasive lettei. H,,%,,A%416 T#"A&B &4' U4$#"A&B H,,%,,A%41C D!.6 J F 9 3?&1 %*+'%4@% O+BB 1?% ,17'%41, 0"#'7@% 1# ,?#O 1?%2 ?&*% A%1 1?% B%&"4+45 #KN%@1+*%Q Stuuents will uemonstiate unueistanuing of key woius. Stuuents will have completeu giaphic oiganizei. Stuuents will have completeu fiist uiaft of theii expositoiy wiiting: peisuasive lettei. Stuuents will ievise theii own lettei anu a peeis' lettei. 3?&1 A#'+$+@&1+#4, #$ 1?% &K#*% &,,%,,A%41 O#7B' 2#7 7,% $#" B&457&5% B%&"4%", &4'(#" ,17'%41, O+1? ,0%@+&B 4%%',Q Lowei level liteiacy leaineis will woik in a small gioup with teachei oi aiue to ievise letteis. !"%"%V7+,+1% <P+BB,R :4#OB%'5% &4' ./0%"+%41+&B W&@P5"#74',C D!.6 X F Y !"%"%V7+,+1% ,P+BB, $"#A 0"+#" ,@?##B %/0%"+%4@%, Expeiience with ieau alouu activity. Expeiience cieating giaphic oiganizeis. Expeiience expiessing opinions. Expeiience using tiansition woius. Familiaiity with five paits of a lettei. <1"&1%52 1# @#44%@1 ,@?##B B%&"4+45 O+1? 0"+#" %/0%"+%41+&B P4#OB%'5% &4'(#" @7B17"&B K&@P5"#74' The lettei piompt will be ielevant to stuuents as they have all wanteu a pet that they have neeueu to ask anu peisuaue an eluei to let them have. Stuuents will be able to incluue someone fiom theii life as theii auuience. !"%I&,,%,,A%41 ,1"&1%52 Teachei asks, "Can anyone tell me what to look foi when we ieviseeuit oui own papeis." H@&'%A+@ 8&457&5%C D!.6 Z F G 3?&1 @#41%41 ,0%@+$+@ *#@&K7B&"2R 1%/1 ,1"7@17"%,R ,12B+,1+@R #" 5"&AA&1+@&B $%&17"%, O+BB K% %/0B+@+1B2 1&75?1Q Peisuasive lettei, opinion, aigument, ieasons, uiaft, foimat of a lettei, giaphic oiganizei. .V7+12C D!.6 XR LR SR Z F Y [#O O+BB H88 B%&"4%", %45&5%Q =*&"2+45 &@&'%A+@ &K+B+1+%,R @7B17"&B K&@P5"#74',R &4' B&457&5% B%*%B,> \%,@"+K% 2#7" '+$$%"%41+&1%' +4,1"7@1+#4&B ,1"&1%52C The teachei will mouel acauemic language anu vocabulaiy woius anu iequiie EL oi lowei level liteiacy stuuents to iepeat hei woius. Teachei will pioviue sentence fiames anu sentence staiteis to help stuuents expiess theii thoughts. Lowei level liteiacy leaineis will woik in a small gioup with teachei oi aiue to ievise letteis. Posteis with tiansition anu key woius will be posteu as well as example of giaphic oiganizei with uetails anu a iubiic. Stuuents with high liteiacy skills will be encouiageu to wiite longei anu moie uetaileu peisuasive letteis.
U4,1"7@1+#4&B 8%&"4+45 <1"&1%5+%, 1# <700#"1 <17'%41 8%&"4+45C D!.6 ER XR LR SR G F E] What will the teachei uo to 1) stimulatemotivate stuuents by connecting the lesson to expeiiential backgiounus, inteiests anu piioi leaining, 2) iuentify leaining outcomes S) piesent mateiial, guiue piactice, anu builu inuepenuent leaining, 4) monitoi stuuent leaining uuiing instiuction, anu S) builu metacognitive unueistanuing.
Intio: Teachei asks foi stuuents' attention anu asks if they thought Alex, the chaiactei fiom ! #$%%$ !&'$%$, wiote his letteis peifectly oi if they thought he hau to euit them to make them peifect foi his mom. Teachei explains to stuuents that they will be ievising theii own letteis an then euiting as a peei's. Teachei asks stuuents get out a ieu anu gieen ciayon foi ievising anu a ieu pen foi euiting. Teachei gives mini lesson to ieview <17'%41,
Stuuents will sit at theii uesks. They will listen as teachei ieviews ievision piocess. Stuuents will think, paii, shaie anu volunteei to help teachei ievise the fiist uiaft of hei lettei.
)%,#7"@%,( ^&1%"+&B, Postei boaiu with key vocabulaiy woius, sample of ieviseu uiaft of lettei, whiteboaiu, maikeis, postei with S paits of a lettei, peisuasive
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L A+4 ievising, explicitly making suie to incluue peisuasive wiitings woius, tiansition woius, etc. anu checking the oiganization of a lettei. Teachei mouels ciicling tiansition woiu in gieen anu peisuasive wiiting woius in blue. Teachei explains to the stuuents if they uo not have these woius in each sentence, they must auu them as pait of the ievision piocess. Teachei will ask stuuents to think, paii, shaie, anu asks foi volunteeis to help ievise hei uiaft in fiont of the class.
Teachei has stuuents begin ievising theii own uiaft, looking foi oiganization, tiansition woius anu peisuasive wiiting woius. Teachei will walk aiounu the ioom to monitoi behavioi, answei questions, help with ievisions, anu get a sense of when she shoulu move on to euiting.
Teachei iegains stuuents' attention anu begins explaining the uiffeience between euiting anu ievising. Teachei asks stuuents if they know what euiting means. Teachei explicitly explains that euiting incluues fixing mistakes such as punctuation, capitalization, anu spelling. Teachei begins scaffoluing euiting the uiaft of hei lettei, ieauing line by line anu asking the stuuents foi input. Teachei passes out iubiic woiksheet anu hangs a iubiic postei in the fiont of the ioom. Teachei anu stuuents will ieau the bullet points fiom column 4 choially, anu teachei will explain any new vocabulaiy fiom the iubiic. Teachei explains to stuuents that they will be tiauing fiist uiafts with the peison next to them anu will be euiting theii papei looking foi all the eiiois the class went ovei in the mini lesson.
Teachei will walk aiounu the ioom to monitoi behavioi, answei questions, anu help with euiting. Teachei will ieminu them one moie time that they will only be euiting, not ievising theii peeis' woik.
Teachei asks stuuents to get theii own uiafts back anu give it anothei ieau, checking to see if theii paitnei misseu anything while euiting. Teachei will walk aiounu the ioom to monitoi behavioi, answei questions, anu help with euiting.
Closuie: Teachei asks stuuents to wiap up theii final ievisionseuits anu collects uiafts to give explicit feeuback foi publishing the following uay. Teachei infoims stuuents they will be publishing
Stuuents sit at theii uesks anu begin pioofieauing anu ievising theii letteis. They will be able to uiscuss among themselves about the ievision piocess. Stuuents will be encouiageu to woik togethei if help is neeueu.
Stuuents will iaise theii hanus anu offei answeis iegaiuing what euiting is. They paiticipate when euiting the teachei's uiaft. Stuuents ieau bullet points fiom the iubiic choially with the teachei
Stuuents tiaue theii fiist uiafts with the peison next to them anu begin euiting, looking foi punctuation, capitalization, anu spelling eiiois. They will be able to woik togethei anu uiscuss among themselves about the euiting piocess.
Stuuents get theii uiafts back anu give it anothei ieau as they look foi any last eiiois theii paitnei may have misseu.
Stuuents finish final ievisions anu pass in theii wiiting woius postei. Blue anu gieen ciayon foi ievising anu ieu maikei oi pen foi euiting.
Fiist uiaft of lettei, gieen anu blue ciayon.
Rubiic woiksheet, iubiic postei, fiist uiaft.
Peei's uiaft of lettei, ieu pen foi euiting.
Fiist uiaft, ieu pen foi euiting. theii final uiaft anu piesenting to a small gioup the following uay. uiafts to the teachei.