Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences,

events, setting, and/or characters. ----------------------------------------------------------------Avoiding linking verbs, using action verb, adding details and descriptions. The girl was pretty. The pretty girl turned heads The pretty girl combed her long flowing hair The woman was kind. The kind woman helped the old lady cross the street, but unfortunately a truck came by and squashed her. Then one of Michelles wolves ate the dead body. Choose Any Two The teenager was mean. She was a good teacher. He was a jerk. She was annoying.