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Prepared by Outback Social Media Communication Team Zhao Liu, Brian Giaquinta, Miao Li, Yi-Hsuan Chang, Shaojing Wang Prepared March 31, 2014
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Executive Summary Introduction Problem: Ineffective telework management is a threat to ITI. Solution: Develop a system for productive teamwork and collaboration Conclusion References 3 4 5 7 10 12
The main way the restaurants products and services are promoted is through TV, magazine and newspaper Commercials. However, this type of mass media promotion is extremely expensive and becoming less effective. Plans to purchase national commercial coverage have been discussed, but the budget is simply not flexible enough to justify such an investment. According to The Washington Post, the 30-second commercials cost approximately $4 million per spot during the 2014 Super Bowl (Kay, 2014). Popular television programs such as American Idol average $310,000 per commercial time slot (Crupi, 2014). Therefore, our current focus is on local advertising, which is far less costly but covers a much smaller network. Based on the financial statements, Outbacks advertising efforts consumed nearly 50% of its total costs while yielding a mere 20% return on investment as major restaurants turn to social media for promotional purposes. In order to lower costs and increase ROI, we suggest a switch from mass media to social media to promote the restaurant. 2. Limitation of the audience There is no doubt that mass media has a large number of viewers. However, with the appearance of new media and the development of social media, the dependency on mass media has decreased significantly. Furthermore, the recently discovered phenomenon of audience fragmentation has led to more effective advertising efforts via social media versus mass media. Media systems dependency theory (MSDT) believes that the audience seeks mediated information to meet their demand (Ball-Rokeach & DeFleur, 1976). Based on the different
Figure 1. The comparison of media dependency between Mass media and New Media
3. Lack of immediate feedback Mass media is disadvantaged in that it is incapable of retrieving and responding to customer feedback. Given the ever changing behavior apparent in modern consumers, it is imperative that a growing business be able to respond to customer feedback in a positive way. Previously, Outback has failed to accurately represent their target audience in advertisements because of the time lag between feedback and the launching of new marketing campaigns. As a
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Generalizes efficiently and with reader and purpose in mind Validates information with details, logic, and source Emphasizes the important and de-emphasizes the unimportant Focuses on readers needs and goals persuasively Avoids direct quoting of material and paraphrases successfully Executive Summary provides an overview of the White Paper Reflects the logos (facts and figures the reader needs), pathos (benefits to reader) and ethos (credible information) Provides specific information of use to the reader (cost, timeline, personnel, for example) Action statement in conclusion (22+ pts) 25 (20-22) (<20)
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Organization (25 points) Summary Presents supporting details in a logical sequence Uses an appropriate writing strategy (frontloaded, persuasive) Introduction: problem and, proposed solution Conclusion: sum of key points and appropriate action step Introduction and Conclusion are stand-alone paragraphs Style (20 points) Adheres to clarity principles, using active voice, unambiguous subjects (no this or it or these), and appropriate language for audience. Follows concision principles (few words, minimal negatives, few superlatives) Avoid unnecessary passive Keeps paragraphs relatively short and accessible by covering just one topic, including a transition word or phrase every 2-3 sentences, and consistent word choice No vague superlatives Keep sentences relatively short, but with some variation in length Word choice results in acceptable, professional, positive tone Format (20 points) Clear interpretation of correctly formatted graphic before the graphic Single space lines, leaves blank space between paragraphs, non-indented paragraphs, left justified, one inch margins Correct short report format (title page, works cited page,APA) Descriptive, concise title with element of persuasion(APA) Descriptive headings to label major sections, properly formatted (APA) Highlights text for emphasis and easy reading (e.g., bulleted or numbered lists, italic type) used sparingly and appropriately APA Format followed: internal references and reference list at end of document Document saved properly (lastname_proposal) Mechanics (10 points) Spelling, grammar, and punctuation perfect, no missing words or misused words
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