background and the current situation The structure and order of the report need to be improved to help understanding the material
Are the recommendations relevant to
the project aims, systematic and thorough? The
recommendation is relevant but need
explanation about how to implement the solution to make it more systematic
Are the selected solutions the best one
to achieve the aims of the project? The solution provided is the most obvious solution that can be implemented Need to explain the condition which the solution can be implemented
Is there any aspect of the project which
needs further attention? In conclusion need to be more clear on why we need to introduce in the school Down side of the second hand batteries More clear on the environmental impact
What is your overall reaction
to the report? The
structure need to be improved but
overall, the solutions can satisfy the client needs