Notes

Stakes felt raised in every scene

o Make sure you have a good sense of character and where they are
coming from
o Maybe work with the partner more before first showings and focus
less on your own material
Make sure you live through the moments and keep searching for new ones
Nice work on the doorbell
Experiment with the bathroom need to creep up on you not so wiggly
Hes direct but doesnt realize it, so make sure youre not playing it just be
sort of direct
Maybe not so physically awkward, what he wants and why hes doing it
Good transition
Make moves and the end clearer
Make sure youre reacting to her especially on Titanic