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Who
Chucktowncommunity
What
atornadocausinginjuries,extensivepropertydamages,andevenfatalities.
Where
AquartermilesouthofUniversityAve.andEighthSt.inChucktown,ME
When
10:59a.m.thismorning
How
Atornadoandstormtorethroughcommunity
Why
Storm
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Tearingthrougheachbuildinganddestroyingeverythinginitspath,atornadostruckChucktown
thismorningaround11:00a.m.leavingmanyinjuredandevensomedead.
TheF3tornadobarreledthroughthesouthsideoftown,tearingaparttheAdamsElementary
Schoolandmanyhomesthatleft28injuriesreported,12incriticalcondition,andthreedeaths.
OurpreliminaryreportindicatesthetornadowasanF3,ShirleySnowfromtheNationalWeather
Servicestated.
Thewindspeedreachedupto180milesperhourleaving3,000homesand100businesses
withoutpower.AnF3tornadoisclassifiedasaseveretornadomeaningwallsandroofsaretornoff
andtreesareuprooted.
Allthedisheswerescatteredaroundthekitchen,thefoodhadcomeoutoftherefrigerator,and
brokenbeerbottles.Justamazingwhatatornadocandotoaplace,saidcollegestudentWilliam
Hoxxy.
Itdidntonlystrikehomesandbusinesses.AdamsElementarySchoolwasatargetofthethe
tornado,aswell,cavingintheroofandcausingseveredamage.Luckily,studentsandmoststaff
hadthedayoffduetoaconferenceinaseparatebuilding.
Normallywehaveabout300kindergartenersthroughfifthgradershereplusabout25facultyand
staff.Idontevenwanttothinkaboutwhatmightvehappenediftheyhadallbeenhere,said
principalJerriePotter.
Manyranforsafetyhidingunderdesks,chairs,sprintingtotheirbasementstoprotectthemselves
andtheirfamiliesfromthetornado.
OnesurvivorKathrynKoffeesaidOnonesideofthestreetyoustillhavehouses.Ontheotherside
itlookslikeawarzone,itsflattened,theresnothingtherebut,Igotmykids!
#1
Lead30words,activevoice
Tearingthrougheachbuildinganddestroyingeverythinginitspath,atornadostruck
Chucktownthismorningaround11:00a.m.leavingmanyinjuredandevensomedead.
#2
Nutgraph(morespecificinformationparallelingthelead)
TheF3tornadobarreledthroughthesouthsideoftown,tearingaparttheAdams
ElementarySchoolandmanyhomesthatleft28injuriesreported,12incriticalcondition,
andthreedeaths.
#3
Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
OurpreliminaryreportindicatesthetornadowasanF3,ShirleySnowfromtheNational
WeatherServicestated.
#4
Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
Thewindspeedreachedupto180milesperhourleaving3,000homesand100
businesseswithoutpower.AnF3tornadoisclassifiedasaseveretornadomeaningwalls
androofsaretornoffandtreesareuprooted.
#5
Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
Allthedisheswerescatteredaroundthekitchen,thefoodhadcomeoutoftherefrigerator,
andbrokenbeerbottles.Justamazingwhatatornadocandotoaplace,saidcollege
studentWilliamHoxxy.
#6
Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
Itdidntonlystrikehomesandbusinesses.AdamsElementarySchoolwasatargetofthe
thetornado,aswell,cavingintheroofandcausingseveredamage.Luckily,studentsand
moststaffhadthedayoffduetoaconferenceinaseparatebuilding.
#7
Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
Normallywehaveabout300kindergartenersthroughfifthgradershereplusabout25
facultyandstaff.Idontevenwanttothinkaboutwhatmightvehappenediftheyhadall
beenhere,saidprincipalJerriePotter.
#8
Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
Manyranforsafetyhidingunderdesks,chairs,sprintingtotheirbasementstoprotect
themselvesandtheirfamiliesfromthetornado.
#9
Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
Ononesideofthestreetyoustillhavehouses.Ontheothersideitlookslikeawarzone,
itsflattened,theresnothingtherebut,Igotmykids!saidsurvivorKathrynKoffee.
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