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Introduction:
Specific Purpose: To persuade the audience about illegal immigrants wanting to better
Attention getter: Over the years, a dispute has arisen over the issue of illegal immigration in the
United States. Although there had been an open door policy on immigration for many
Preview statement: While the differences in the contradictory and racist immigration laws are
provide for their families, as well as, give their children a future, something that is
Body:
I. Main point #1: Many individuals would agree that racism should be prohibited. It is
negative approach that only results in more controversy. The United States
immigration laws are inconsistent and racist. Does that mean they should be
forbidden?
A. Support for #1: “The United States was created as a nation of immigrants
who left Europe for political, religious, and economic reasons” (Katel
404). They wanted to better their lives in order to have hope for a
B. Support for #1: What about the racism? “In 1890, Census Bureau Director
Francis Walker said the country was being overrun by ‘less desirable’
(Katel 404). Also, “[b]efore 1944, the illegal traffic on the Mexican
C. Support for #1: These people, whether they are illegal or not, are human
beings. They deserve an equal opportunity to provide for the well being of
(Murray 2666). The racial slurs are used thoughtlessly just as the
II. Main point #2: Still, illegal immigrants, especially from Mexico, dangerously attempt to
enter the United States daily. Although some may succeed; many others fail. They
sacrifice their life in order to discover ways to improve the lives of their families.
A. Support for #2: “Dust Devils whirl around us as the raw sun torches the bleak
landscape. The hot sun blisters our feet. The vast desert swallows our
7). The men experience many harsh difficulties while seeing more
than desired. “Searching for higher wages and a better way of life,
undocumented foreigners (the supply) cross the border to find jobs, which the
U.S employers (the demand) want to fill with inexpensive labor” (Murray 2666).
B. Support for #2: “They left behind the respect of the community that knew them as
honest men who braved the American desert to feed their families for the
scorn of a country that depended on their back-breaking labor but refused to see
them” (Annerino 76). People view illegal immigrants as a disgrace to society, but
C. Support for #2: All of the quotations lead back to the most important reason “illegal
immigrants” enter into the United States and that is to provide their
families the ability to succeed. “They left it all behind because Mexico could
not offer them, and 40 million others, the one thing they needed most to
pull themselves up out of the depths of poverty and despair; an honest job for an
III. (Main point #3): On the other hand, the critics of the nation’s immigration policies have a
different view on the situation. They say “illegal immigrants take American’s jobs,
threaten national security and even change the nation’s culture by refusing to assimilate”
(Katel 393).
A. Support for #3:_ Katel states that the immigrants’ advocates believe that illegal
immigrants take the jobs that American’s refuse which in return boosts the
economy (393). The largest hindrance is that many employers see nothing
wrong with hiring illegal immigrants; the job has to be accomplished. “‘The
crime of the immigrants is that they want to work hard,’ said Frank Sharry, the
group. ‘The crime of the employers is they want to help the economy’” (Murray
2666).
B. Support for #3: Evidence shows that the illegal immigrants are not trying to take
away from the Americans; they only want to better themselves. Former
Hutchinson, agrees that the law should be enforced; however, when a family is
being productive and contributes to American Society while still having a good
life, yet in fact they entered into the U.S illegally, the illegal aspect cannot be
C. Support for #3:_ “We understand the humanitarian reasons that brought them here”
(Katel 413). Those facts tie back into the idea that “illegal immigrants”
Conclusion:
Summary/review statement: We, therefore, the people of the United States should
reconsider the negative images that are involved with the issues of “illegal
immigration”. Despite the open door policy that once resided here,
today the policy is a controversy. What one person may view as a positive
illegal, they are still an individual that provides for their family by working.
All in all, illegal immigrants want to find ways of improving their poverty; while
American’s want to preserve their economy. Is it wrong to want a better life?
Should one be criticized for wanting what is best for their family? Absolutely
not! Just like any other American, they would go above and beyond
if it pertained to the well being of their family. Also, they would strive to
Concluding remarks: Immigrants are people too. They are taking the necessary actions
What type of visual aid(s) will you use? I will use some images that express the work that
immigrants have done and some of their accomplishments here in the United
States.
What equipment will you need? I will need a video recorder, a laptop computer, light to
make sure the recording goes well, and possibly a table to place
everything on.
Works Cited
Annerino, John. Dead In Their Tracks: Crossing America's Desert Borderlands. New York: Four
Online. CQ Press. Dallas County Community College Library, Mesquite, TX. 25 Nov.
2007 <http://library.cqpress.com/cqresearcher/cqresrre2005050600>.
Murray, Mark. "Border Games.(illegal immigrants from Mexico)." National Journal. 33.35
(Sept 1, 2001): 2666. Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. Thomson Gale. Dallas
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