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How can your environments impact who you are and the choices you make?

Pick one of the following scenes from the play. Think about how the situation affected the Monster. Think about how if the scene unfolded differently, the Monster may have changed. Rewrite one of the following to show how they would have impacted the Monster and his choices in life if the situation had been different. 1. 2. 3. 4. When Frankenstein sees the monster for the first time and his reaction is to run away When the monster is in a town, where dogs and towns people are after him When Felix shoots the monster When the monster kills William

Rewriting Frankenstein

Your scene should have between 2-4 characters. 1 or 2 of these characters may be your own characters (not from the play). Your scene will have two parts: 1. What happens to the monster (the situation) 2. His choices as a result (the impact) Which scene will you rewrite? When Felix shoots the monster

Then the monster will run away and call revenge. The Monster is feeling rejected, angry and lonely.

Felix does not shoot then monster and the monster will help them live and gather wood and food.

Then Max will come in and try to kill the monster but the monster killed max and all the villagers because they are trying to kill all three of them. Then they rule the village. And live happy for the rest of their life. Then the monster calls his friends

Rewrite the scene using your ideas from the purple boxes above. Your scene should: Include A Note On Staging refer to page 6 in the Frankenstein play o Explain the set design o Explain the costumes and props o Explain lighting, sound, and special effects Include a paragraph to explain your choices for your Note On Staging Include descriptions of the characters refer to page 8 in the Frankenstein play o List each character and give a short (2-3 sentences) description of his/her appearance and personality Include stage directions (in italics) to indicate how the characters move and how they speak In your scene, include dialogue that will move the plot along and show how the new situation unfolds and how it impacts the Monsters life

Criterion A: You compose a script that shows how a situation impacts the Monsters life using a lot of details (dialogue and stage directions).

Criterion B: You write in the form of a script, using the appropriate structures expected in a play script. Your scene builds appropriately.

Criterion C: Your write your characters to reflect their personalities and tone. Your script is free of grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors.

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You do not reach the standard described below. Your script reflects very limited imagination Your script does not use the Your script does not reflect the voice of and creativity. It does not show the organizational structures of a script. the characters. situation and how it impacted the Monsters life. Your script is generally disorganized. Your script has very frequent errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Your script has no details (dialogue, stage directions) to show how the Monster develops through the scene. Your script reflects limited imagination and Your script sometimes uses the Your script sometimes reflects the creativity. It attempts to show the situation organizational structures of a script. voice of the characters. and how it impacted the Monsters life. Your script is beginning to be organized Your script has frequent errors in Your script has insufficient details but lacks coherence. grammar, punctuation, and spelling. (dialogue, stage directions) to show how the Monster develops through the scene. Your script reflects some imagination and Your script usually uses the Your script often reflects the voice of creativity. It somewhat shows the situation organizational structures of a script. the characters. and how it impacted the Monsters life. Your script is generally well-organized. Your script uses generally accurate Your script has adequate details (dialogue, grammar, punctuation, and spelling. stage directions) to show how the Monster develops through the scene. Your script reflects imagination and Your script consistently uses the Your script often reflects the voice of creativity. It shows the situation and how it organizational structures of a script. the characters. impacted the Monsters life. Your script is usually well-organized. Your script consistently uses a formal Your script has substantial details The ideas build on each other. tone to explain. Your grammar, (dialogue, stage directions) to show how the punctuation, and spelling are accurate. Monster develops through the scene. Your script reflects a lot of imagination and Your script uses the organizational Your script masterfully reflects the creativity. It clearly shows the situation and structures of a script in a sophisticated voice of the characters. how it impacted the Monsters life. manner. Your script shows a mastery of formal Your script has illustrative details Your script is consistently welltone to explain. Your grammar, (dialogue, stage directions) to show how the organized. The ideas build on each other punctuation, and spelling are Monster develops through the scene. in a sophisticated manner. completely accurate. Include a title Use the format of a script Edit for spelling, punctuation, and Describe each character o Skip a line each time a new grammar Include a note on staging to explain character speaks Use first person when writing the how your staging choices (set design, o Italicize the stage directions dialogue costumes/props, effects) show the o Write dialogue by bolding Use the type of language that the situation and its impact on the Monster character names character would use when writing Employ dialogue to show how the scene Build the dialogue and action to first the dialogue develops show what the situation is, then how Include stage directions to show the the Monster is affected action Use details to show the actions and emotions of the characters involved

In order to succeed you need to:

Rewriting Frankenstein
NOTE ON STAGING SET DESIGN A simple cottage in a village Inside the cottage there is a wooden table, two beds, three chairs and a book shelf Wooden door Pots and pans PROPS Felix A gun for One rabbit for Agatha Gun powder and bullets for Felix COSTUMES Torn cloths for Felix Old skirts and shirts that are too small for the monster Monster: a torn and bloody t-shirt and pants. Then he will get cloths that are too small for him. LIGHTING/SOUND/SPECIAL EFFECTS A spot light for the monster when he says FOR Agathe. When the villagers invade there is lighting in the back ground When the monsters came in the house there is a red light

Why I chose this set


I chose this set because I wanted to show that the Monster is nice and can help people be getting them food, water and clothes. The props show that Felix is a hunter and is good and finding food. The costumes I chose is to show that the Monster has been chased by dogs and people are trying to kill him. Felix and Agatha have clothes that are torn and are too small because they dont have a lot of money. I want the lighting to be red when the Monster came in and add suspense. Agatha walks in with a rabbit and the Monster is knocking on the door while Felix is polishing his musket. The monster is walking around the house and is trying to find a way in. Felix: WOW, that is a lot of meat there. We can have a feast tonight.

Agatha: I know, I am going to cook now. Felix: Do you hear something? I do. Agatha: Yes I will check the door to see if anyone is there. Felix: Ok. Felix: Get down! There is a Monster and he looks like he is trying to kill you.

Agatha does not get down she stays there and feel the Monsters face. Agathe: NO DONT SHOOT HIM. HE IS KIND.

Monster: Yes, I help you bring wood. I dog friend live help me. Felix: I DONT CARE! Monster: but they help live good, war help. Felix: I will shoot you. Agatha is in front of the monster protecting him from being shot. Agathe: I will kill myself if you shoot the Monster. Felix: Fine. Felix puts his gun away and lets the Monster in the house. Monster: I get food. The Monster comes back and is holding a dead cow and 12 eggs. Felix: Thanks, Monster. Felix: We need to give you a name. Monster: What is name? Felix: Your name should be Monster. Monster: Name Monster. All of a sudden Max (the villagers priest) comes in and tries to kill the Monster. Max: I will kill that Monster. Agathe: Dont shoot him he is nice. Monster: I nice, you bad, I kill you. Felix: I declare war.

Monster: For Agatha! Max: (clap) all of the villagers come and try to kill them!

Felix: We can take them on. We need help. Monster: No we dont, I am strong (He flexes and looks strong).

(Scared) Felix: Ok. Max: Begin the war. Why bother trying to fight? You know I will win.

Monster: Can I call my friends from the jungle? Felix: ok. Monster: he screams loud and a lot of wolves come and help them defeat Max. The Monster has lived and was being raised by wolves in the jungle and was making friends that could help him if he was in trouble. Max: Dont kill me! You can do anything to me but not kill me please. Monster: You hated me and my friends. You shall pay for what you have done. Felix shoots Max in the middle of the stage and a spot light is on Max. Max: You shall pay. Agatha: Shall I pay for what you have done, to me and my friends. Then Agathe, Monster and Felix live and add on to their house and live happy for the rest of their life. One year latter Monster: Bye, see you in one hour after I get the food from the shop down the road. Agatha: ok, see you later. Bye Fore year latter The monster, Agatha and Felix are having dinner in a six story house and have taking over all of the land and have given all the pore people some money to live with.

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