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This is the first 50 pages to Order of the Nine: The Stonebearers. It goes beyond the previously uploaded chapter,and alters the formatting a bit. I would really love some feedback on this kind of formatting. Does it read easily? Do the graphics show up well for you? Etc. Feel free to offer some feedback on the story as well. I've altered things to hopefully appeal to a bit younger audience, and not sure if it works as such.
This epic fantasy, a bit of a crossover between YA and adult fiction, follows the the gathering of the Order of the Nine. These unique people are the most capable of wielding their respective Spiritstones from their kingdoms in the developing war meant to bring balance back to the lands of Taloria. It is the goddess' will that brings about this war, and it is her right hand, Tulbonae who conspires to bring her delusional fears to an end and set her children free to pursue their own destinies.
Taloria knows that for them to fail it will only take one to not fulfill their destiny, as it is only together that the war can be won. Tulbonae has been conspiring behind the scenes for years however, using her ability to foresee future events, and plays a desperate ploy to get the Nine together and defeat Taloria's desire to ruin them all. So begins their journies, discovering that they are chosen as the bearers of their kingdom's Spiritstones.
This is the first 50 pages to Order of the Nine: The Stonebearers. It goes beyond the previously uploaded chapter,and alters the formatting a bit. I would really love some feedback on this k…