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Name: ______________________________

Editors name: ________________________


Intro Paragraph
Thesis statement: _________________________________________________________
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Main idea 1: _____________________________________________________________
Main idea 2: _____________________________________________________________
Main idea 3: _____________________________________________________________
Main idea 4: _____________________________________________________________
Body Paragraph 1
Does the first sentence explain what the paragraph is about? Yes / No
Are there three pieces of evidence? Yes / No
Is at least one piece of evidence a quote? Yes / No
Does the author of the paper use LIQFU for all the evidence? Yes / No
Are there transition words (next, also, finally, etc.) that vary for each piece of evidence Yes / No
Does the last sentence explain what the paragraph has to do with the thesis? Yes / No
Body Paragraph 2
Does the first sentence explain what the paragraph is about? Yes / No
Are there three pieces of evidence? Yes / No
Is at least one piece of evidence a quote? Yes / No
Does the author of the paper use LIQFU for all the evidence? Yes / No
Are there transition words (next, also, finally, etc.) that vary for each piece of evidence Yes / No
Does the last sentence explain what the paragraph has to do with the thesis? Yes / No
Body Paragraph 3
Does the first sentence explain what the paragraph is about? Yes / No
Are there three pieces of evidence? Yes / No
Is at least one piece of evidence a quote? Yes / No
Does the author of the paper use LIQFU for all the evidence? Yes / No
Are there transition words (next, also, finally, etc.) that vary for each piece of evidence Yes / No
Does the last sentence explain what the paragraph has to do with the thesis? Yes / No

Body Paragraph 4
Does the first sentence explain what the paragraph is about? Yes / No
Are there three pieces of evidence? Yes / No
Is at least one piece of evidence a quote? Yes / No
Does the author of the paper use LIQFU for all the evidence? Yes / No
Are there transition words (next, also, finally, etc.) that vary for each piece of evidence Yes / No
Does the last sentence explain what the paragraph has to do with the thesis? Yes / No
Conclusion
Does the essay have a conclusion? Yes / No
Does the conclusion restate the thesis and main ideas? Yes / No
Does the conclusion take the thesis farther applying it to our own lives/world? Yes / No
Other
What is effective about the essay? (at least 1 thing) ________________________________________________
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What needs improvement in the essay? (at least 1 thing) ____________________________________________
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Score this essay:
Intro
Thesis: 1-5
Main ideas: 1-5
Body paragraphs
Intro sentences: 1-5
3 pieces of evidence per paragraph: 1-20 (2 per piece)
Lead in for each piece of evidence: 1-10
Follow up for each piece of evidence: 1-10
Conclusion sentences: 1-5
Conclusion
Thesis and main ideas restated: 1-5
Thesis extended: 1-5
Grammar and editing: 1-10
Style and format: 1-10
Structure: 1-10

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