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Moreover, (how to fix argument, ways of improving the logic) … the argument could be improved by …
… would resolve the doubts expressed above
A reliable survey of … might serve to …
Furthermore, legitimate evidence that … would help as well
Without more specific and detailed evidence as to what …, it is hard to share the author's opinion that ...
Rather than …, a stronger argument would analyze unexplored possibilities...
Thus, although the argument is weak for the reasons described, it can be strengthen with the suggestions given
above.
Because the argument leaves out several key issues, it is not sound or persuasive. If it included the items
discussed above instead of only …, the argument would have been more thorough and convincing.
Issue
First of all, … .
For example, …
(Relate the Example) Just as it is ..., so it is ...
In conclusion, ...
Restate Thesis; Summary of Outline