Professional Documents
Culture Documents
by
Azian Mohd Zain
InstitutTeknologiMARA, 1991
DISSERTATION
Submitted in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the
degree of Master of Fine Arts in Advertising Design
in the Graduate School of Syracuse University, New York.
December 1996
ABSTRACT
The problem of this study was to identify the creative elements effectively
used to differentiate products in a parity product ad. The creative elements -
are the headline, the copy and the visual - are the tools of visual communica
tion and they work together to deliver a message. These elements may be
used as references and guides to educators and students who are interested
in deciphering the advertising design of parity product in the future. The
scope of this study focuses on the design aspect only.
versus 7-UP, laundry detergents such as Tide versus Cheer, and baby diapers such as Pamper Premium versus Huggies Supreme.
The parity products ads collected for the purpose of this study were com-
piled from a variety of consumer publications in the year 1996. They were
compiled in a chronological order from the same magazines or different
magazines. The ads were chosen from the same magazine not only to ensure
that they were intended to reach the same target market, but also to give the
consumer a chance to compare and weigh the facts in the ads.
The study analyzes the meaning and decode the advertisement. Then, it is
compared to the other advertisements in the same class to determine which
areas of the advertisement are the same or different from one another. This
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process is intended to identify the creative elements, the picture and the
words/ thereafter referred as the visual and word cues, that have been successfully employed to facilitate design differentiation in the parity product
advertisements. The analyses of the ads were tabulated into key design
guidelines for design comparison.
practicing professionals in the advertising design profession. The questionnaires were designed to collect responses from the participants in a
manner similar to a personal interview. The survey instrument was based
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
CHAPTER 1
Objective
Purpose of Study
Scope and methodology
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6
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CHAPTER 2
Introduction
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CHAPTER 3
Analysis
1)
Makeup foundation
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2)
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Wrist watches
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4)
Laundry detergents
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5)
Stop-smoking aids
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6)
Baby diapers
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APPENDIX
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Survey results
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EXHIBITS
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ENDNOTES
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BIBLIOGRAPHY
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BIOGRAPHICAL DATA
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IV
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MAKEUP FOUNDATION
1.1
Max Factor
1.2
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WRIST WATCH
2.1a
2.1b
2.1c
2.1d
3.
2.2a
2.2b
Concord
Zales
2.2c
2.3a
2.3b
Piaget
Omega
Swiss Army
2.3c
Tag Heuer
6.
Salon Selectives
Pantene Pro-V
LAUNDRY DETERGENT
4.1
4.2
5.
Fendi
Guess
Cartier
Anne Klein
2.1e
3.1
3.2
4.
Cover Girl
STOP-SMOKING AIDS
5.1
Nicoderm CQ
5.2
Nicorette
5.3
Nicotrol
BABY DIAPERS
6.1
6.2
Pampers Premium
Huggies Supreme
7.
8.
OIL OF OLAY
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GUESS
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ANNE KLEIN
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Also, I want to express my appreciation to Syracuse University for its support of scholarly learning and its culturally diverse community that supports
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CHAPTER 1
Objective
Purpose of Study
Scope and Methodology
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OBJECTIVE
The objective of this study is to analyze and investigate the meaning of concepts in parity product print advertisements and identify the creative elements within the group of advertisements that contribute to advertisement
differentiation. The investigation decodes the rationale underlying the image
and its association with the product. The analysis addresses the overall
design of the advertisements such as the headline, copy, visual, layout and
tagline. Then the advertisements are compared to the other advertisements
in that particular category in terms of approach, appeal, format and the execution used that affects the presentation of information in the print advertisement.
This study started off with the intention of investigating parity products ads
and identifying the creative elements that were used to differentiate the
product. As the investigation proceeded, the researcher found that the findings of a study in 1980 by the Ogilvy & Mather ad agency are still being
used in the 90s.1
The impetus of the study is driven by the author's fascination with the
avenues adopted by the advertisers of undifferentiated products in trying to
capture the attention and interests of the target audience. Largely, the offspring of a free market economy, the boom of parity products is largely the
result of industrialists and entrepreneurs taking advantage of successful and
accepted pioneer products. In a market-place that is continuously bombarded with undifferentiated, identical products, the burden of soliciting attention and purchase behavior falls on the advertiser. Herein lies the challenge,
for parity products are mostly physically identical, sharing identical benefits,
attributes and technical specifications. This presents a unique albeit problematic situation for the advertisers. The solution lies in the approach taken in
communicating the physical attributes and coupling them with different
kinds of cues with which the audience can somehow identify.
However, due to the intense similarity among parity products, it is almost
impossible to convey a differentiated image to the audience. Hence, a large
number of advertisements for parity products end up adopting the same
visual and conceptual approach. In addition, some ads convey the same cognitive appeal although paraphrased using different terminology. The result
of these numerous identical ads is a 'look-alike syndrome' that reflects the
very nature of the products itself - parity. This 'look-alike syndrome' can be
defined as ads for parity products that present the same appearance, mood,
appeal and 'sound'. Sound here does not mean sound as a result from stimulation of auditory nerves by vibration; sound is defined as the mental
impression produced (such as the sound of her letter is depressing or
delightful or serious...).
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PURPOSE OF STUDY
In the course of this research, the researcher has conducted the analysis
of the print advertisement sample from the perspective of copywriting and
art direction strategies. The topic presented some challenges as it was
researched through secondary data. In the process of making observations
and eliciting attributes of the print ads sample, the researcher is aware of the
pitfall of oversimplification and generalization. It is not the intention of the
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The results of this study is limited to the range of ads covered in the subjective analysis and the responses obtained from the surveyed participants. The
guidelines derived from this study are useful for demonstrative purposes
only and are not guaranteed to explain examples that occur beyond the sampled data.
The study is conducted in three parts: analysis of the written survey instrument, qualitative analysis of the selected examples of print advertising for
parity products and the comparison and conclusions derived from analyzing
the two sources of information. On a fundamental level, this study seeks to
explore the rationale given by the designers in conceptualizing their message
and analyzing the actual examples of results as they appear to the target
audience. The underlying premise of this study is to uncover how the
designers' considerations of issues or factors surrounding a particular parity
product impacts the creation of its advertisement.
The survey instrument was designed to elicit responses on key design considerations, problem faced, alternative methods in dealing with, and emerging developments when communicating messages from producers of parity
products.
The qualitative analysis of examples that appeared in 1996 were obtained
from eight widely read magazines. The print ads are divided into six product groups consisting of basic consumer goods such as wrist watches, cosmetics (specifically makeup foundation), shampoo and conditioner, laundry
detergents, stop-smoking aids and baby diapers. The analysis of the print
ads is broken down according to the information provided in the ads. (see
tables) Where possible, the researcher will relate instances where items in
the ad converge or diverge from the responses obtained from the survey.
The ads' creative elements - the headline, the copy and the visual, are analyzed by the use of image and the use of words. For example, from the sample of the ads that used comparative advertising, the researcher concluded
that the visual is the most important creative element compared to the headline and copy. The visual will serve primarily as an eye-stopper while the
headline and copy will support the visual. Subsequently, the creative elements are compared to another product in that particular class, and then
were noted which areas are identical and different.
The third part of the study compares and cite instances when survey
responses coincide with the analysis of the ads. These findings will then be
synthesized and summarized in the form of guides that may be used in the
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ads for other parity products, if appropriate. The basis of accepting a practice
as a guideline would be target market acceptance of the message and the relative success of the product being advertised.
The researcher also acknowledges the marketing issues that may impact the
advertising and promotion of this product - areas such as brand equity,
image and perception amongst consumers. However, due to the limits
imposed on this paper, the researcher is focusing on design consideration
primarily, and to a lesser extent, the marketing aspects of the products.
Only one sample population was identified and it was chosen from the 1996
directory "The Agency Red Book'. The individuals are practicing professionals in the advertising design profession holding positions such as creative
director, art director and copywriter. There were no geographic limitations in
the distribution of the population sample.
Each member of the population received the survey instrument, an explanatory cover letter and a postage paid envelope. 143 surveys were mailed on
October 3,1996. The first survey came in one week later and more were
returned in the following weeks. A total of 40 surveys were returned, of
which 5 were returned because the persons had left the agency.
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CHAPTER 2
Introduction
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INTRODUCTION
Parity product, by definition in the advertising context, means products generally perceived as alike by consumers regardless of who manufactures them.
The problems in designing print advertisements for parity products mainly
lies in the fact that aside from marketing ploys, product is almost exactly
comparable with one another in the class. From this perspective, one could
make an assumption that parity products are distinguished from one another by psychological cues and subtle modifications of feature and benefits.
In the general area studied, there exist many product groups that are physically similar but differentiated by advertising. Due to the effective use of
demographic information, the marketing function will be able to reach most
target consumers by communicating the attributes that appeal to the desires
of that particular segment of the market. The task of creating these messages
falls on the heads of the designers.
Imagine the stress imposed on one's creativity when faced with an assignment that deals with making an ad for a parity product. In areas such as
laundry detergents which is literally flooded with varied collection of competitive brands, the task of the designer is made more difficult by decisions
of producers to impart different image of the same basic product to a different set of customers. This practice will generally be carried out until the
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uct, unlike laundry detergent.
When consumer-oriented parity products share the same attributes, the burden of differentiation falls on its delivery. Through the use of psychological
and visual cues, an ad would convey a unique aspect of the product to the
consumer. To illustrate this point further, we may turn to an example such as
the laundry detergent industry.
While the detergent industry is largely dominated by Proctor & Gamble and
Unilever, this fact is not readily apparent to the uninformed consumer.
Confronted by an array of over twenty different brands including store
brands, all of which are fundamentally similar and performs its intended
task with unsurprising regularity, the consumer is forced to rely on other
cues in order to make a purchase decision. The fact that six of the brands
(Cheer, Tide, Bold , Era, Bonus and Dash) are manufactured by Proctor &
Gamble and three others (Surf, Wisk and All) belong to Unilever is unimportant to most consumers. How does one make a choice? How can the design
of the ads help in differentiating these similar products in the eyes of the
consumer?
Creative Elements
What are the creative elements? The creative elements in an ad for a parity
product are just like the ones in the ads for other products - the headline, the
visual and the copy.2
In the ads for parity products which are consumer oriented, the visual
works harder than all of the creative elements because it will have to function not only as a tool to grab attention but also as a visual that says more
than the competitor's ad. The ad is usually structured with the visual and
the headline working together as the visual and word cue. But for parity
product ads, the visual and word cue must take one step further when
showing the product benefit in order to avoid the ad from looking and
sounding the same like the competitor's ad.
In the fashion watch group, visual cues do not need to work as hard as the
visual cues in ads for consumer oriented products. This is because the products themselves are less consumer oriented products and are generally executed through image advertising.
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The use of superiority claim
Both of the laundry detergent group of ads used comparative; the product is
compared to a leading regular detergent. Comparative advertising in the late
60s weren't a favorite execution with advertisers. 3 This has lead to the
overuse of referential terms such as 'compared to the leading regular detergent' because the advertiser do not want to give free advertising to the competition. This practice is seen in both of the ads in this group making the ad
sound the same (because the product attributes are the same). A NAD case
report on the Colgate Palmolive Co. showed that the Company had to make
changes to the product label and retract the claim because they could not
prove that their dishwashing liquids works better than the leading
detergent.4 The same consequences can befall on the laundry detergent manufacturer that makes this type of blanket statement if the manufacturer can
not substantiate its claim. However, if the leading regular detergent is specified and is comparable to the advertised product, the advertiser may get
away without having to prove its claim.
From the study, it was found that if a piece of information is missing from
one ad while the other ad specify that piece of information, the consumer is
able to make the rational choice. That is until the missing information is
made known, the ad with the specified information will claim the position
first in the consumer's mind.
Balance.
The condition in which the elements work together to
achieve visual equilibrium or stability.
2.
Dominance or Emphasis.
Within several elements (or illustrations), one should be larger than
the others. The dominance of one element helps draw attention to
the ad.
3.
Flow.
The arrangement of elements to lead the eye through the ad
sequentially. Once attention has been drawn to the ad, the reader
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Proportion.
The size relationships of width to height of the ad itself, as well as its
elements. The width height ratio of the 'Golden Rectangle' is 2:3. The
size of each element should be proportionate to its importance.
5.
Visual Coherence.
The overall visual relationship among the elements in an ad. Every
element must cohere or harmonize with all the others.
6.
Unity.
When an ad is already visually coherent, unity is achieved by
connecting the elements borders, boxes, overlapping elements,
repeating shapes and background color. 5
To design an ad for parity products, the researcher would like to add to the
list.
7.
Visual marker/cue.
When a picture is included in the ad, not just to make an association
(or an ornament in the layout) but make the picture work for
immediate recognition of the product benefit.
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CHAPTER 3
Analysis
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ANALYSIS
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Makeup foundation
It is learned from the Cover Girl and Max Factor ads that stain-proof is an
important feature in makeup foundation. Both ads showed the similar product benefit but the creative elements can help in making the recognition
process of the product benefit faster than the competition.
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MAX FACTOR
Headline
Copy.
The sub-headline 'Made to stay on her face' (is said by the movie makeup
director) leads into the copy stating that the product has a touch proof system that makes his job easier and keeps the face stay beautiful easy.
It is implied that the makeup foundation he used before did not meet his
needs and expectations in a demanding work situation.
Tagline
'Makeup that performs' illustrates the product's ability to behave in a seri-
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