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It is safe to say the idea that there is little can be done to reverse
this issue is not necessarily true (a messed-up sentence). First,
since the media is under regulated by the governments, a myriad
of governmental measures could be taken to mitigate this
problem. Theoretically speaking, if the governments impose legal
restrictions against the only-for-profit advertisements like the
functional foods, the society will be less likely to purchase those
such things. Furthermore, there are skeptics who never trust
anything of the biased media. Also, they tend to illustrate their
points in attempt to impart the manipulation as well as the pitfalls
of media. As a result, people not only has have higher inclination
to be cautious exercise reasonable precautions involving
with the information of the media but also are less influenced by
the media.
1. The idea that, the fact that => always have that. It is
true it is clear, it is obvious => No need to
a. => it is safe to say there are a variety of ways to
reverse this trend for the good of both parties.
2. Advertising, not advertisement => you are indicating the
advertising activities.
3. who never trust anything from the biased media => this
phrase is subjective. => who never blindly trust anything
that comes from the media.
4. => Also, they tend to expose the medias manipulation
techniques and pitfalls to educate others. As a result, more
and more people will develop the habit of exercising
reasonable precautions involving information from the media
so they can protect themselves from being manipulated.
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General statement
Your opinion
Idea 1: Media does have control
Supporting 1.1: People are dependent on the media
Supporting 1.2: For ex:
Supporting 1.3: Most big media co. are for-profit => focus on
advertising
7. Supporting 1.4: For ex:
8. Idea 2: It can be reversed
9. Supporting 2.1: By the government
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Supporting 2.2: For example
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Supporting 2.3: By education (for the public)
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Supporting 2.4: For example: provide more media
courses
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Conclusion: Restate your opinion => YES the media
does have the power
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Conclusion: => BUT solutions are there.