Analytical Writing
Avsysin se pres cover a majo spss, whether by he presen, the
tian ofthe Federal Reserve, or the acesed purty Inthe mst een ex
Scandal their next isan anal of very dalle speakers words and
‘mannes People not ony Tike to Iisten to aumento they oie fo a
fut about them. Pola! punt Bil Rely even hasan soaps cometh
"uy au he ay nguge of pol nd med hain
“An undestanding ofthe cements of angument provides you not only
‘te ay twee yourown agent so th thou
‘rte bout tose oma When you write anes shout an argument at
‘you have rex listed oor sen, you hae two major apn, You may
{Choose to make actu, nonjadgmental statement ost the gue, oe
you may choos to east
Writing the Claim
yu canine ne mat cnt Mons ommend we an
‘ay eaplaning wat tactics mere wet yt per consumes to eat
‘Donalds ort ty MeDonalds newest sandich, you wou e suppor
gaia cao acho: Oo thes a yo eae he
ads effectiveness in stracting adult consumes, you would be support
‘mn eatatie claim, ofa claim of ale isthe didesence between epg
Gels use of ag gecko ins ads and pring tht maicig econ
\Whatthismeans,of couse that wha you wie out omer
thes pen ha yo awl hate dam ao
‘What about clin of ple, the tind typeof clin intduce in
(Cate 1 anayng a agument would Be et havea tess tat
‘pressed what should ot should not be done. Cams of ply ae fete
‘vented Tey do nook bck ad expres what should have been done in he
st but instod look forward to wat sould be dane inthe future. You might
Fret ey abort what MeDovals shuld doin future bu ou would
rot ely be ting an anasa,
‘Think how cms of fc ae aims of value might seve a the sate
rents for essays aw veten arguments Chats Adamss say Lincolas
[gis etic of Aaa Lincoln's Getysoang Adres ana thas ports
cl of value
Lincoln’ ses id ot he wold ois uy. et a,
shen wat te on mmber of ero an alkene
An objective analysis of the speech, bused on lan of act mght explain the
‘ton Inthe conte oft ime Lincoln's eof poet language.
‘Consider bon you thesis would lok diferent you were making sie
‘ment bot document instead of mang det
‘Gains of Fat: The Declaration of Independence ba its al on two
“Lins wt suppoc factual eidence and apes to the
‘Asa loge pattern of argument, the Decaation of
Independence large deductive
Cains of value! Jerson’ cle, elegant, formal prose rnin a
masterpiece of English prose and persuades us that we
revealing a esportant document
‘Te document’ npc send for meser readers
‘bsause sever sigan! terms ae ot defined
What type of thesis dose Roger Kap support inthe folowing analy?
Enabling Ignorance
sack Obmmas vein ofthe "No Ci eft Mein Act” (NCLB exly made
i nougn Congres ts yea. Ona pasa at the statin of George
Sash in 2902, NCLB shows eat happens wen “exper” and poll hick
sted eplace commonsense and experince. Fortunately, Dine Ravi his
ge pln «hh toe eer Ne Yok Cy a nate
(singe el i war ta mw pa[lie a new took showing why the ens devng NCL promot the wes
‘ssn Ameren pub shoals without doing anything for he stenghs The
Daath and if of the Gat Amer Seka Som sand cata ton the
sso hat ancing soap eaton i eed with ck
Tn dein gat of sco in aa pu ho ce a
[THs epoch ald atenton to the Sang anda sd the steady
‘coson uf aang contontch cus n many ino mo dice
Tavichy» Columbia TAD who ba exned widespend aio a
‘a hsorian of Amenean publ education, beam + pried ofthe form
‘ovenent She insted tot withow ateron wo the suatance of a gh
‘nsehoos— the ereatam change under any ame mee cosets
Rach shows ats when thet had ec Hs fas With the ps
sage of NCLB the lor movement ws subverted bythe thosmoaey att
‘Sts nthe posal and pey mang cles encourged ball manner of
alec slemen who sth geen opportnie of shoo om a, ot
{Me pimead owing about som witout understanding te pe sho
‘comple el cont tnstead of estoy gusto educate, NCLB et,
fue nrction At the canter of heat esting
“ets have inherent pagel functions beyond the fulness in ass
‘ng stad ening ti he NCL scheme, testing eee the ink oer
{ng most runousy federal money. Dsus and shes aed es Scores oF
lestmoney and eventual were but owe by erly, penpals and teacher
{pe mei yo pending that, sony favonble evaluations, cording Yo the
"tet prance, Never had corpton bee nodes Basel into
Perea shoo
‘ce the ess stort blame fr ale ths shod progr wee te
teachers they and the anions wee fred ino the capt fees ae
‘tonal shortcomings Nether he administer, who ely Kew thing
Sout anything no the plc, ike New Yor CHS Mayer Blomberg, who
‘were tuning ain terms of administrate flee noe he chancel,
Ike sew Yor oct Wen or Wastnytn, DC's Mee, wee ake
{ag only interes of meanings ot uber none cold conc oath
‘more nligent tant el each hey were not ding te fobs proper. Tas
sone wt one ofthe upd slogans ote NCL st, hh wth the
or dete “ce wath wey ap ave
‘neers in dpetes with the ech union on hf nade mit
[ye dubious igen ino the acho ye, came ein! hat i Hee
the id not undestand or hos ode et ow badge! nue, an hs
{nately sal school system oy bag tnd) Nor has anyone i he
D.C. school sytem ever explained bor one ofthe too he ices ses
‘he cout, you cut the mount o money noma vase pe ppl
lene the most now and under ng
Not my job the usual apse o ployee of the eduction indy,
soot of whom no ches wen conte i sow fare, Tacs,
sto tend tobe met ous ven I prone feng sent hngerple
ture an hey take esponsy or whar gs oi he atoms, Bul what
they often te you that they ate ee (oy sed shi who ae neve |
sancti ig ow a
fou cannot homes tach Kis how tea ty do te hen ea
ing sane what he edocaton wer. Hnch feel conten
‘eh cucoum.Histy complete with dates events nd betes mth, compet
‘th formule equations nd ken of comput tgn ngage cms
ce wi vocals aih and re den mis, compe Mh aes nd
Ses ms pe edcton, emp ih san ila ports usa
ists en epee yang wears ath pb a a
ompreerion sates” And isch who devant hse
tens are suppoted ot ont ycomenen sere by had wens aby
teens viewed naga rank ty a eduion eben hae
Pic ayer yveing is th ane mae Ca
"aces how one mM coef bu ae avd sop wasting tne
‘eamitinghnowtge when they soul be showings how nk
Uhensees a aces tse Wen escer Gos tht Yu a tk
yours you have noting think abut, te pinch, superintendent school
Counselor. Deprtent of asaton pal apostate
tm ena of achercetred karst of he beng eles ees
iti tars Meow and tas dents wong in sal group an ecte
‘Undermining each shorty in he csoom erodes the democratic
and egalitarian premio pubic ection, ice undersastheopertnty
Stool at spp protic
“bay Haih shot he expos hs theme more dep by examining
she sc a hat ender he cna niet apie teeing
the pe sevice ole of public sos The eetahishen nue te eats
tunlons, wae asp ath cst endeneal toe ok he Sow
Soni That ns invariably suppor irl Democrats ever
lection strengthens the sent they ae cmt sats Quo amoung
{oa kind of plasaton stem fr yor an dadvantaged tes Nobex
‘hie tbr ua ying ot ee py a es fre mere
{sto une shou objeto cans» sion or undningowm Insys
ono way or psi cy
‘Ofcourse on shel sever snk an shor 0 wit the ook she no set
ut ite but The Death and iff he rt iran hl eee te
eo sy (17814) ay eer te Ra esto 7 Hope he
ssiipam nt theo io rrpmeson thatthe kn ofeach nk Rath peat oun
herons enya indigenes nara oman, wich am pose oak
tte autor ation oe te es Sansa sce
“Amenean Fderaton of Teaches, Sina) Fi sn and Wengen, Tse
ssc exceptional urs tn Ameren educton ann American nker stay oo
‘many sdcatonupn leaders ak te aos rm, then wal he oa
Fhe tiled nd fling pce ach emcee
avi sna ays tthe een tht plc soa each a,
oui soars sol sateen ond oppor hey thee
‘3 by imbung chitien and adteents whe earng—a enya
‘ibe Bt not salon. They oth no by teahng them cho ear
‘ety ang them al orig Teche mt ous pos coshog
sd cmmaity ede, tut inong tu loving a ty ech crs Sas
‘Thesiger he man th sche
ston his stand owe ut he torn movement tar Maced
{he rand implemented nthe ‘is nce gue of NCL, des ot ne
{his By igh a excelent teacher soe hi tn sees eas eed
snot og ed tn se cans ta ne
‘sae ee of eet choosing tery numer toy pry whine a
eee hl ate ponsored atts Dae idspe in ar to sb he
tae ine pubic choos carne cnen by uttetes aherthanceln
{es sal colton o oben tht he ci nd corptionintedaced
by NCLB ting retemens—nhi intad loering te bro ee Soa
ledge rset ge Acar sty nfonate
the teaches unions have not enone hte bu ty ean ey ae
‘oteionl neg fr the Anescan ana for geting yous Homes pee
{ngs question would ake ws beyond the scope ta Rach wants ts covet
‘The Dah and fof te Gat an Sa te,
“On of Rvics mos emia profound pressions Snow ou own
istry come as no supe tos haw hte Ameren hse he apes
noo ie, even they hap go abst bung lon na ds a
ns forte damage ono ple sls
Scoot ae ot sine bt ce ar negro stuns, pad
047i nts how to suced program, bute a inementa sang od
{lng wn ning vas int cand ass is ot ce ee
“he teachers represented by the UF the New York aches won, know
|S doe the sho of The Death and Lo he Gc Aran Shot Sem
1m Kaplan essay and in the eater examples ted on the Geeysbucg Ad
‘res and the Declaration of Indepencence, we wee looking st one document
‘ane and thus ata singe argument Attia you wl wan fo compare Sra
(ormore arguments, sythesing tlie, Aga ete ae a Dae ge ot
‘thesis that you might choose to support, shoe that btely analyz te pois
‘of companion or eontast between the two sid thve tht cate the Co In
‘elitonship to each ater Ifyou wtoe ans sbout how the two ples om
ae they might look ke mee
ims of Fact Where Jefeon bse his argument pinay on logical
sppel, Lincoln depended primary on emotion
spel
Because Linco’ purpose was to datte a cemetey,
helt pict mas ot hi references othe pla
Sution that was onthe minds of his stent Bechse
Jetlerson knew he was jsttyngreblon for King
‘George but aso forte ture spelled ot xpi
iy why the colonies were eaing wit Englund
Luncoi’saddress a peso pose hat cal rk.
taper n American history, bt Jeon’ Declaration
Ishad a much greater impact san nspation fr
ther refom movements workin
Diferent as the two ists! documents ae, Both the
(Gettysburg Arn and he Decaraton of indepen
sence wer eect ia ahiering thet respective
purposes
aims of Vala:
Planning the Structure
‘When your purpose in writing about an segumen to spon afc im,
You wil most thay se ery simple and et frm of ganization called
‘ijentn he maine. al Tums o organization, you ne to elena your
Ian ida, o a, ith support inthis cae the sport wl come om the
rgument or argaments You te writing aout
‘At times, your cam may sup the onanization of your esa, a WH the
‘sew the fist example abou te Declartion of Independence:
ec cuando ci on on syn
‘Thebody oan say with thi thes would mostly have vo main divisions,
one about actual evidence, proving examples an the oer aout appeals 0
“aloes, aso providing amples. The othe tet sbout the Decaation of lt
‘ependence doesnot gees sucha view stature An ey base on th
‘hss would ed 0 expsin howe the Declaration an example of deductive
retsoning, most sy by Hist exablshing what generation te document
‘s based om and then wat species Jelfeson uses to pone thatthe colons
sluation fs that generalization,Remember that when you compare o contrast two arguments, there wl
‘eto ose pattems to howe roa for tatuing the cay, One, often called
unt:pant comparison, discusses each point about Subject A and Subject 8
foether befor moving on othe second pnt, whee agua Bo subjects ae
ps
I Introduction
1. Content
A Jetleson
1 mplcenesexpitnes
4A eteson
1, Language
A etenon
Lincoln
‘he second often called pal ne compartson, focuses nought haf he
tssy on Subject A and then nthe other half o Sujet Te pnts made in
‘ch half shouldbe pall end shouldbe pretend inte tne ondee
1 Introduction
1 Jetson
1. Implictesexplcnes of ferences to polities
. Language
A. Contest
1. Implicinesexplcness of ferences to polts
Language
1, Coneasion
Using Sentence Forms to Construct
an Argument
When you present an argument that responds oan esay or that uses research,
1isumpertant wo cea expat How the previous wate approached the ope
tnd then expan how your view aifes. Tete point in quoting o pat
Plating an author and ending with “and {agree fda, aademic wating
nears explaining current thinking on a top and shveng ow tI ferent
from what you believe Sometimes the pons of ference ae ag, sometimes
smal: Bt in wring for colleges crt that you expan your own une
Standing of a stuation an that you express your mn pint of em
stato think about how you mig sommanie th gamer of thes
and present your own i you have a mode rom webich to wore Ths ind of
‘model called a sence fm, ant can lp yout ng the presentation
totes ews and your own reponse to them, Hee a some base sentence
fev fo thie Kind of work
On teapot ___ attempt male the eae tat
These sentence forms are useful for presenting a be summary of anothers
views onan sue. Note thatthe nal cence for ples tal the we as
Indo makes omic ume ou wold he oan Xs
ecg oo
A tanps tomate he ae that
‘Quotations area powerful way to present anothers views wen te language
prtclny sing, cles, and sueene. (Fo more on ung quottony, ined
Ings alternatives tothe verb “wees, "se the Wie Gude: “corporat
Ing Quotations ino Your ex” on p88) Thee templates lp you to employ
‘ey skin making an argument showing the work ones have done onthe
Ise The net step is to intoace your own vie,
She cine eis acaly tm thatPe
‘Te foul fortis kind of template Introduces what the author hast say and
then fs you tke your turn with your own eof the mater.
"a ths sugges, wing in college means aking pat In an ongoing con-
‘eration. Youteed to be respectful of wat eter sa nd wet and you need
To secon: for their postions accurstly, You'll want to be suet lest sam
Thats the aulhors presentation, Weave more to say about summary shorty,
‘tty putin wing agurents you mist show the author's ptt before
Sou expla how you dene dif, Youll eed to beable to sum up ane
Fairway at te wer sy. Then, when you respond, yu can ase on mone
point, but yl esd to oc onthe pda of agreement.
‘Whtee you ae with sone of whats wrap, ut not aloft, you mus
sisingush between the prs you think ae correc ana those pats tha are not.
‘Sentence forme for this Kind of response ncude the fallow
ieee at eae ine
tun eta
‘Tes sentence templates ask you to Mey those pants the argument that are
‘all Resp in ind tat sre to age totaly th every ew expres
Than eo A cnet argc wl separate out what comet a what nt
“The tec hen fos enc o sboeng these pars ate not coe.
{tines you'll ed to covet» dita or misterent oo Si
ssc, for nln, cn be ad often sre mania to pret the ager
‘epotn inthe best gt You may wish o propose a alternative interpreta
Sicorsetthesttestn ler ont one more sate and ivr
{o your own pont of view Of coune, you want abe cera that You donot
{tlor susie for more the npotance of ng Sats fay see te
farabcusion on pp. 212-13) Heres» seatene for for corecting factual
inrmation na eget
Yeni cine sacle tat
ca sainaton af
‘these tempts low you to ier mistaken lm of act an argument
tind present evidence opporing
More often, rather than coecting car mistakes ff, youl need to re
fine the agument of writer You may Sn that mach of te argue makes
Sense to yu, but thatthe wer doe not sucentlyanispate importa ob
jects, In those nes, a entence form sch one ofthe following an help
‘you reine the agument to make a Suonger conclusion
‘evs, mare sect coin
‘Sch sentence fom alow you to clay and amity an argument
‘At times you'll need to distinguish betwen the ens oft fleten wa
‘aid then weigh in th your own assessment ofthe station, When to
“hthor write on the sme top hey ill ost Hhly share slay Views on
some of the pints They wl heweve, disagree on other points. Smit, you
Inay fn tht you agree wth some OF what each wer usw say, Dut Usogee
‘ith sone other part Your fob to ent the pont of contrat betwen he
{roatithors and then explain how your ow poston dies fom one or bth
In howe ete, you ms ind the fllowag sentence forms help
‘carl writes makes sure the reader understands ine dstinctons. The forms
ove hep ake those distinctions eet
"Wile sentence fowis may beeather simple —pechap even smplisie—
ood tes ue them all hee Once you ave ed them out ae Ue,
oul begin to se ser atom, perhaps without even elzing it. They
2c powefl tools for incorporating then’ ews nt Your wn woek abd the
fripng you to mae careful dtincons sbout various prs of arguments.
Providing Support
In writing shout any argument, you wl ned to undestand the agement and
‘mate ft lear o yout readers that you do, You cannot wre a lea expla
‘ono far eraurton you donot havea esr derstanding of Your suet‘ou wl nee to ook closely atte ple to eal what spec words or eas
Ted you tothe thts statement tat you hve chosen fo suppor.
“our support for your thes wl cone Hom the tx or fexts yu ae wat
tng sbout inthe form of summary, paraphrase, ot quotations. The abil 10
"umimari, paraphrase, snd quote material om your source s necessary 18
triting about angumens, but te alo eset in wating your on segments,
peal those that require reser
‘Summarizing
2 summary voles shortening the orginal passge 3 well spurting I into
Soucown words I ges the gi ofthe pase nling the important pela,
Intl leaving out dtl. What makes summarising cul tat equies
You tocar fen lang and comple tens in jst a els Oe sor et
‘ph To summarize wel, you need to imagine yourself the autor 0 he
ce you ste summarising and te trac tothe Sas he autor Is eres
‘ren hen thse ess cont with your pont of riew. You mex hen move
oot from being care reade fo Benga water who, n yout een Was,
{ecruter anthers thoughts
‘We simmirze formany reson oe us boss know the basso what we
have been doing oto ta tend wy she should o should not sea movie
In your cscs you at offen sed Yo mmarize als or books, anderen
‘wn thi sot am epic prt ofan asignment, the aly to summarize
Fusually expected. That when you ate ntact analy an esa (0
‘compare and const a novels cna to this work ithe abity to etl
‘comprehend and recreate author’ iss. Soe pages 48-50 in Chapter 2 for 8
‘more deal tetment of ummanng
Paraphrasing
Parapiasing invoives resting the content ofan original source in your own
‘ors I difes fom sammarzigin that pape Is roughly the same
Tength a the posnge paraphrase: instead of» condensation of longer pas
‘ge You il ie paraptirasing when you want to capt the ea but there
‘oth aout the wording that makes repeating i necsexy You may aso se
ten thee can be mae clare y epasing I or when the tle is make
‘cal iferent rom yout own, Hee an example dwn rom 3 student paper
Tandalph Wana victim ofthe hallemide dtr hms nd
(Canna reports that ts estinated 1.004 12,00 dtoried Pals wee
‘mse mater who nk thai (2)
‘There no singe sentence on page 40 of the Waste atic that both pro
‘es the estimate of number o act babes an Wenties Warren sone of
them, Both the des were important, tt nether of thean wat worded nrc
‘nlgue way that a diet quote was needed. Therefore, a paraprse was the
Jogi choice. In ths ase, the wits cnet document he paraphrase wing
Modern Langue Aascelton (MLA) sve
Quoting
Yow hy want oqo pases pri om your sou hey expe
Siidalaans ore cfeceimt yur own rings se You ay
{Soman s sere hp acc eke eee ram ae
Sou suport Ite suthor of is satmem stesso nor
aut weet deo uty one be nol ep
‘om qotthat autor Aste sea paper in Caper ts gs
Tiina stot women combat Supposing he ou OF Ange
‘sic fret poper he ound ever ser that se tt ome he
‘By who ne die coma epee yey Ding
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‘Smendon shai ube cng aor auphng women to combat
‘eset er thes two pons Ange Cho tes tan
fom nnauhotyin be 8d wing APA se
"as oppaty ming tie ste ene tea he
cout ffetes cot batonn ce oporartrs iay
Sere eet ny mac BN
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Ie espaclyimporant in argumentative witng to establish a sour
thority on the suet under diction, The most common way of ong tise
to se hat persons name and position of autho to nteduce the quotation.
1 inthe previous example It corect in tat MLA snd APA yes to prod
the auors name in parentheses a the end ofthe quoted materia, bat that
‘ypentdacamentstin precluses ending tothe quote the weght of ts having
ome fom a author risky that those rears not the mltary— and
‘ven some who rel not nove who Donel as by Seng ee ame
Spurenthese Your wing al always have more power If you exablsh the
Sthonty ofeach author fom hone work you quote paraphrase, o sum
‘ae To establish autho, you may retro the parson’ poston, isitaional
ffliton,pubations, some oer similar “can 10 tae”
Another empl aso using APA Sy
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fin heting Spelt Group anda omputr tng ence” ox
tmatn animals "None thse ao badges allocated psa for
‘asc procreation. oon have buen eased primary aerial
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Thera te rina means of hing superna austen o your on tet
emer atin ea am he il aon fare stew capa
bythe avbrs rae the tof wes ced the eno the pap ye
‘pautor saben. The urbe ates the poe ol tse wh
‘he micas agper The cals of wat appa pte il be coved
Ine mate dion of AP amercan Peo asco) and MLA Moca
lange aSsacatn) cocoon ses
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{ence hates jou do nt sate te utton Fo your snes
nm ules tres acter nn forthe camer ahd you so ot apa
the Rist werd of te quit, ues here's anther a for ng So es
‘er. tate, he ay be bes hen ou ae ange eet eh
‘traces fo mae te quttan func au tear uhen hed
‘ke oe sna ung, say mae
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dares Rachels (1976, Unesty Potro of Py a he Urey of
aa at nga and author of ar bat rl plop pos
that anal ato ibery eves fo "8 ue ht mole Reve oe
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‘eingtam and ator of srl sk on eral hsp. aie Pasta
‘al toby cee fom “ama bane at eRe oes
ready heme 0)
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‘est commot way of educa mctaton Be tue sonra ae fe
{2g and oben the tan wth acpi’ tr Athe end fe gute
se teat, re pagent and ty ties ces neato
ene atten de pod
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aa at raga and stor of seal tots or orl pony ae,
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ns ny te be sera eed 4 mo bat nt ot fo he es
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Deseo a ee om a mare asi nt nae one’ rece Puede
ome)
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Steno ry sugar trys tom ser thie ey Meer
‘tating bac pred eecrone tm, ks tamer wen pes
totes res tee carting reson to ups tse
pues conte: roles res
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cones ans eon sages
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‘ae he aca tom compte sant a es
amps
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Foroargl te 2nch 200% Dr He Hedow (185 poe tat sabato
‘rte henan ques ene ata bee nethoesrerstoa Noman
‘ology “Wit amas the so athe tae ete oe to
Sgt eae av ep thee fed, they een rt on deter he
‘Sac tne nat nd keapng tte fm mse fp 9)
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‘eat Uses el ound of he Coen esting Soest Grup
andof "ono dara sere’ for mete airy aeltowcdes ee
aie poston spc rearton olysn basng Sars coy he
"een esblsed priya eestor esbiors at se ony secon
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seer eo hme i
‘aioe incu et oe re tation neste he
mitoDocumenting Your Sources
CChaper 11 wll provide addtional Information abowt documenting sours,
but you shosld tr owe documenting your use of oes wrk even wher the
‘nly sures you tse ae esys to this textbook. The single mest important
thing fo remember why you nee to inform your reader abou your se of
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(of the Word "Retard"?
‘A Movie, a Word, and My Family's Battle
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tect tht unwanted atenton ut then my lad, laeyed daughter es ry
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love for 2 yen plays some the carci of Down scons, 2
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argument about the borders een comedy an ae spre, pce
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Sars ene 9 poy aimed the move dt.
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lnttons by the bunds of ouande They had no legal ganache
‘man my age who sew a na smal own is Geom tld ne aout a Boy
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‘oeanging branch,
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‘i potion of nals oductan ont The Americana ith Diss At
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Iie tn pve Experts inate ta fewer tan 8 pet of hoe of woking
sg are anpoye, even though research sbows at they ate oe and eect
‘rks hen hen soppor snd mst with pore ob
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(Dandie As ue expectancies eres, ht tame OWS
‘On tp ofl hs the problem of nope pb sites, Recent esearch
coved the Univer of Masachets found th fen cole, more
‘han half of young people woul sper tine with tant than nlc
sty. re than Pa of parents ht wane sch sets tr ens
Senool. Amos half the youn people surveyed woud st next fo a stdent
he Magee ona seo
"find these ets and stats eying: My ban and I have spent mich
ofthe ps te deals doing al we can to sbi rae om the ects
‘shat et dsb th lor hud werk om her prt and th the ae
‘Ropor olay and eas he fing beter dn drt edie whe
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{nd senor center: St’ ela the gyn. She tively sot network. cl
hone, ema adres. Thats ot oy that her Me oy he tne, bat
‘Sem tobe working
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ato popes toward respecting nd ang all ur cues, But Tm stopped
ly the thought os most contuting scarps se ln at
‘omainentyfestue te word “eu witout a thought to te consequences.
"ecording to the nonprofit Arco the Une tte, pople wit Seveopacn-
‘ction of “Neer go fl eta” oto the lesion ea ep thing that those
‘role have bees Runde otha apo and = ee.
Decors andthe actos in Tp Ter have ady atat is isnot
‘hes pete. They ta the mole targets Holywood and sok oils
past expan of people wth dain steep ied cbse ac
Hain Mon ad Foret Gan.
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‘se fora eo. ts teen re sn ial ae nie oo
{tyson potions for fede of pec sd expec,
‘et opie hunt provides anther example ofthe unthinking sceptance of
language tat pomees oppression, Antpating Pui ety, testo was
(srt to Dl nee and sutton ala moe A white actor,
i blacks to portrays lack character countered ey tay
Thx actor etiqung his actors Bat theres noon-sien rsenee countering te
Simple ne poral nora the flmmater const peopl th ine
bales ce te tami tout me seg
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talities wou toch nerve ltr bl the sim than wo Wa 0
‘Again we ar: mean ike Bt an gen up. does ean yng
Tor mlions of Amen ke Margret and me, oes
The Case Against Banning the Word “Retard”
‘CHRISTOPHER M. FAIRMAN
oe the wor retard have les than tice wk ove?
ig foe Ha mane, Seah Palin and Rac Limtbagh mad the
ord fade fr plial controversy ad itenight punch lines, « movement
‘es underay to eliminate tom everyday convertion Saying, betty, that
‘he word ands variatons ace nul to any, te Spal Iss adng
{mpalgn to ead tse and is promoting sauna sarees ay on Mach 3
‘Neat 6 00 prple hae sgned on ote fellow poate oe eon.
“Tee snd spp the lnintone he derogatry eo the rors om
rea speech a rom the sean and cn of ee he
Taympathize nth te flo, bt wos be making tt pledge. nt tat
"ve comet rae the word “eta us don think we shoal tary the
hisory a atnsve ems in Amerie shows anythin, shat words hemes
{ert he cpt the meaning me aach othe and sch means cage
“ramatialy ovr tune aed acto commun, The en "etal adel”
‘ws el inrced ty the mel etlhrent inthe 200 erty to sp
‘nt othe terme tat ha been deed fens. Sy, the won yan
“gute and even the Nowe can be Instn, fend detying or wadenic
‘Sipe mo sa oto he Marte Calg ona Oho te rete
‘Shc nur fst de hl a on Rea Bt te
are appenethe Wang Po ona 000.‘The wased and eating eso such wont atimaty sender sl.censorihip
campaims unnecessary And esi Speco rt comes wth 3 potent
pee needles stata tabs govenment ener raed
Frdom of expretion tat we snd be mayo ying
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ister Acts unhuppy wih the ac of beal-care on, dering
those as expletive carded" Palin the mother of specced
‘Ui tok to Facshook to demand Emanvels rng, being the fevenest.
{tthe Ror to that the Ned Limbaugh sete he lowe ond 9g he
{ound nang wo wth ean bunch of people who seta eas
‘ne fain shed os dense, sang Lamba ad wed the wo ail,
{Comedy Canta Stephen Colbert tok te a one saling Fale an Tepe
‘ar! snd ing with se: Yow ee? Wael
ane aploed ae promise ota the Wondorg pl,bs 8 March
{nears the word may aed be a endangered specesFoyeight se ave
"ete to remove the tr mal eaten om ovement sence and
State ces and sin pening in Congres sr ty fel
States hae sil ose sh the tnd With Dsl Batcaton At
The nest advocacy gp forthe intelectual abe, te Acton for
‘eared Cz, nosy te A. iy, the Asean Asocaton of
‘Mental Retarstion saw the Asean Awol on ttle ad veep
‘mental Dass. The Centers for Disase Canta and Preven now ei
fecal day” n place of "mental tadon.* The dings manus ued
by seal profesional lo embrace “ult! debi” te otf abel
end the changes eb! hat enation does comnts ity
te rape,
“Te fon thatthe ae of ‘mental tation” ad is ants was oi
rally an attempt to convey seater dignity and rpc than pes lab ad
"Whe the vr sear” ies to dey ov hnder— hat ot nthe 5th,
‘cent ue reference o ena development nt ocr tthe ie
{than aly 2 cena, when med texs bg dene cen
‘with rtrd mental devlopmeny” tad hen? and “eal ered
ent” By me 1950, "meal etsdtion® became the peered eda em,
‘Ratully replacing enous cagostie standard ach it "imbce ad
oroa—terms tat ha cme to cy pejorative connotations
‘Iwas growing up nthe 170s, nate more or he Teas earnest
of ental Heh at ental Retraton, one othe am senamed tte ge
Ss The ter “easton” was comme ia myhome a feb wa ee
{nd cnt Tis only the past generation tat the il Yer aed Io
the sang rear and gained power sa nal The si seven appre
paar movies. There mar ite pbc conttowesy when Mat i edt moO
{meron Die nthe 1988 ht comedy Thee Semin Abt Mary by coin
Is pasion: "1 wu ith retards” (Dr chat, Marya mental sale
ror) But 10 years ate the comedy Tope Thnr, Res Downey 1s se
the pase “flit” eo pcetng and also bayer
"What happened to make the word gor extinction?
Allctres have bos Wet cept the Unite aes,
seperti srrounding sees, rounded agen subconscious
{en ofthe pare of hoerser- seit waned pregency. Ines, veel
iets —that might Btls because of same sx betas, Some the
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