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They pay more attention to 1. Parallel structure 1. grade is a noun, They pay more
their grades compare to (when X so I need to attention to their
comprehend the class compared to Y, change grades rather than
materials. X and Y need to comprehend comprehension of
be the same into noun form, the class materials.
grammatical which is
type) comprehension
She believes take-home 1. Sentence 1. ways for She believes take-
exam also benefit the structure- Run- instances home exams also
students in many ways for on sentence creates a Run-on benefit the students
instances, they soar difficult sentence. I add in many ways such
math questions better 2. singular or plural such as to as grasping difficult
independently. error connect two math questions
ideas together better
3. inaccurate word 2. exam is a independently.
choice countable noun,
so I need to
change to
exams
3. soar is not a
correct verb, so I
change it to
grasping