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    The poem expresses the feelings of someone who received harsh criticism that made them feel like their future was meaningless and broke their heart. Despite putting in effort, the criticism did not inspire them to be their best but instead gave "burns of foolish integrity." However, the person realizes that while they may not be what was wanted, they are proud of who they have become and that difficulties, like rain, are necessary to create something beautiful like a rainbow.

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    The poem expresses the feelings of someone who received harsh criticism that made them feel like their future was meaningless and broke their heart. Despite putting in effort, the criticism did not inspire them to be their best but instead gave "burns of foolish integrity." However, the person realizes that while they may not be what was wanted, they are proud of who they have become and that difficulties, like rain, are necessary to create something beautiful like a rainbow.

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    Poem 2

    Uploaded by

    Nate Alfaro
    The poem expresses the feelings of someone who received harsh criticism that made them feel like their future was meaningless and broke their heart. Despite putting in effort, the criticism did not inspire them to be their best but instead gave "burns of foolish integrity." However, the person realizes that while they may not be what was wanted, they are proud of who they have become and that difficulties, like rain, are necessary to create something beautiful like a rainbow.

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    Alfaro, Allanah D.

    12Humss-10

    The best Ill ever be

    I was doing the best I can, in everything I do


    I never expected to be recognized,
    It was not even recognition,
    It was critique

    That turned my world upside down,


    It made me feel like Im in a bottom of a black hole
    Staring into the abyss,
    And I thought that my future is meaningless

    Despite of the effort and time,


    You didn't inspire me to be the best,
    But gave me burns of your foolish integrity.
    That broke my heart.

    I may not be what you wanted to be,


    But I am proud of what I am now
    I came to realize that,
    You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

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