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Directions: Read the following sources and complete the related questions.
Imagine that you are a member of an organization that is trying to stop child
labor during the time period of the Industrial Revolution. In the space below
write a letter to a local government official stating your perspective on child
labor and the conditions present in the factories. In the letter you need to
explain and give specific and historically accurate information regarding the
experiences that the children face in the factories, and create an argument
against the use of children in the workplace. You will need to be persuasive
and convincing in your writing and use historically accurate information to
support your perspective.
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Excellen
t 8 Explanations are deliberate and comprehensive, 2 The writing is fluent and purposefully organized.
revealing a perceptive understanding. Support is Vocabulary is precise. The writing demonstrates
E specific and accurate, and errors, if present, do not confident control of sentence construction,
detract from the response. A thorough understanding grammar, and mechanics. Errors, if present, are
of the assigned task is demonstrated. inconsequential.
Proficient 6.4 Explanations are appropriate and purposeful, 1.6 The writing is straightforward and clearly
revealing a clear understanding. Support is relevant organized. Vocabulary is specific. The writing
Pf and appropriate, but may contain some minor errors. frequently demonstrates effective control of
A clear understanding of the assigned task is sentence construction, grammar, and mechanics.
demonstrated. Errors do not detract from communication.
Satisfactory 4.8 Explanations are general and straightforward, 1.2 The writing is generally clear and functionally
S revealing an acceptable understanding. Support is organized. Vocabulary is adequate. The writing
relevant but general, may be incompletely developed, demonstrates basic control of sentence
and/or contains errors. An acceptable understanding of construction, grammar, and mechanics. Errors do
the assigned task is demonstrated. not seriously interfere with communication.
Limited 3.2 Explanations are overgeneralized and/or redundant, 0.8 The writing is uneven and incomplete, but is
revealing a confused, though discernible, discernibly organized. Vocabulary is imprecise
L understanding. Support is superficial, may not be and/or inappropriate. The writing demonstrates a
always relevant, and may contain significant errors. faltering control of sentence construction,
An incomplete understanding of the assigned task is grammar, and mechanics. Errors hinder
demonstrated. communication.
Poor 1.6 Explanations are tangential or minimal, revealing a 0.4 The writing is unclear and disorganized.
negligible understanding. Support, if present, is Vocabulary is ineffective and frequently incorrect.
P incomplete, may be marginally relevant, and contains A lack of control of sentence construction,
significant and/or frequent errors. A minimal grammar, and mechanics is demonstrated. Errors
understanding of the assigned task is demonstrated. impede communication.
Insufficient
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