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Hannah Reed
UWRT 1104
March 7, 2018
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Covassin, Tracey et al. “Immediate Post-Concussion Assessment and Cognitive Testing
test. The main outcome is to see the accuracy of the test and is supposed to represent what an
athlete is like post-concussion status. Some points covered were how many athletic trainers used
the baseline test, the most frequent sports that the athletic trainers administered the test to, and
when the athletic trainers would allow the athlete to play again. The conclusion for this article
was that most athletic trainers relied on symptoms more than the baseline test.
of studies that pertain to the profession of athletic training. The author, Tracey Covassin, is an
associate professor of kinesiology in the College of Education at Michigan State University, she
is a certified athletic trainer in the sports medicine program. The main research she does is for
This was a very useful article for my research because it showed some of the technology
used to help diagnose concussions. My thinking remained the same because I already knew a
little about how ImPACT testing worked due to having to take it myself in high school. It did
help broaden my knowledge on ImPACT testing and how trainers judge whether an athlete is Commented [1]: spelling
ready to take the field again or not. This source will most likely be used for my project because it
Ortho Info. American Academy of Orthopaedic Surgeons, June 2017. Web. Mar. 2018.
<https://orthoinfo.aaos.org/en/diseases--conditions/sports-concussion/>.
This website article is about sports concussions. The article describes what a concussion
is, symptoms, causes, the doctors examination, treatment, the return to play process, and ways to
prevent concussions. A key point in this article was recognizing the confession and getting
proper treatment. “Coaches, parents, and school administration must be aware of the athletes
with a concussion.”
To me this is a reliable source for the information given. The source gives a decent
amount of information, it gives kind of the base of my research because of the detail it gives
about concussions. The source was peer- reviewed by Stuart J. Fischer and contributed and/or
updated by Rick Wilkerson and Wayne J. Sebastianelli. All are Doctors that specialize in
orthopedic surgery. Sebastianelli and Wilkerson also specialize in sports medicine. With their
specializations I can see where they could be credible but at the same time they aren’t. I say they
aren’t credible because their main focus is in orthopedics not neurology; then I say they are
The source was very useful it gave me more information on the return to play process as
well as prevention for concussions. My thought process broadened as the source went over the
doctor’s examination test. I will be using this source because it gives be the basic information on
sports concussions.
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Sullivan, Chad. “Canada: Concussions & Varsity Sports: What Colleges And Universities
Should Know.” Concussions & Varsity Sports: What Colleges And Universities Should Know -
www.mondaq.com/canada/x/679360/Sport/Concussions varsity.
This new source talked about how concussion have been in the news recently. Key points
in this were what a concussion is, symptoms, how athletes don’t admit they are injured, and
concussion lawsuits. The conclusion to this article was that it’s not always possible to prevent
injuries but that’s why sports procedures and protocols for when athlete gets injured.
This is a reliable source because it gives not just basic information it has the facts to
back it up. It talks about NHL star Sidney Crosby getting his fourth career concussion for the
2016-2017 season. It also talked about a 17-year-old who died because she ignored her
symptoms. Then it talks about how colleges and university should take action immediately. I
would say Sullivan is credible because one of his areas of law is occupational health and safety. I
The source was useful it broadened what I already knew from my other sources. It also
gave me more things to look into like concussion lawsuits and how colleges and universities
should take action. I will be using this source because it contains more information on “new
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This news article talks about how the National Hockey League handles injuries. Key
points of the article where the new protocols the National Hockey League uses, how athletes lie
to stay in the game, brain damage due to repeated hits to the head, and lawsuits against the
National Hockey League. The conclusion was that the National Hockey League and certain hits
This is reliable because it took athletes that actually suffered from concussions and talked
about their stories. Not only did it explain their stories it talked about their risk, in Sidney
Crosby’s case he suffered from four concussions in his 2016-2017 NHL season. The NFL also
has had a few cases of concussions. This is similar to one of my other sources because it talks
about how players would lie just to stay in the game, “former Columbus Blue Jackets
defenseman James Wisniewski recounted to The Columbus Dispatch: I said my back hurt so I
didn’t have to do the 20-minute protocol and go through that whole concussion process… A lot
of guys were playing through things… That’s playoff hockey. It’s survival of the fittest.”. Matt
Vasilogambros I would say is credible because when he was working for The Atlantic he had
lead the world and national news coverage. So, he had to go and get the news directly from the
The source was useful. It helped bring the risk factors of a concussion into perspective. I
do plan on using this source because it gives me real life stories to use as facts.
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Peer review source 1
Overall this source seems very reliable. You provided great detail on what is covered in the
article. The authors expertise on the subject was clearly mentioned and helps support the sources
validity. The citation is proper MLA 8 format as well. This source should apply well to your
This source is reliable and comes from credible authors. You mentioned how both of the authors
are experienced in their field of medicine. This source will serve a good purpose for providing
background information on your topic. Try to touch on what exactly a concussion is and how
they are categorized. Over all good use of information. Also, put a hanging indent on this
citation.
This source provides a very important issue in terms of concussions. Using case examples for
this is good because they connect the idea of concussions with real life situations. Sidney
Crosby's career has been bombarded with concussions. Using this as an example is good but
cover more on how players are suing there sports leagues and how the leagues are changing
Another good source, but try to use one in a different league. you have used 2 NHL references,
the NFL and plenty of others sports leagues have had issues with concussions. Try using Junior
Seo as an example, he was a well known NFL player who passed away from concussion injuries.
Overall still a good source. Also, put a hanging indent on this citation.