Professional Documents
Culture Documents
by Presley Branham
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Lengt h c
3 order of paper
t hesis placement
ts
28+
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no pc
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plag
no pc
out t it le
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wce
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Review Rough Draft
ORIGINALITY REPORT
25 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
21%
INT ERNET SOURCES
4%
PUBLICAT IONS
21%
ST UDENT PAPERS
PRIMARY SOURCES
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www.bls.gov
Int ernet Source 11%
2
Submitted to Olivet Nazarene University
St udent Paper 4%
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Submitted to Mississippi State Board for
Community & Junior Colleges
3%
St udent Paper
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Submitted to Centennial High School
St udent Paper 3%
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www.snead.edu
Int ernet Source 1%
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elizabeththeblogger.wordpress.com
Int ernet Source 1%
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www.niagara.edu
Int ernet Source 1%
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QM f ont
You must use a 12-point T imes-New Roman f ont.
QM incorrect
incorrect
QM Length c
T his paper does not come close to meeting the minimum length requirement of the assignment.
Maximum: 1200
Additional Comment
625
QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the f ormat that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.
Comment 1
Use the due date.
QM order of paper
Put your outline af ter the works cited page.
QM 3
Your title needs to ref lect the main idea of your thesis more directly.
Comment 2
replace
QM thesis placement
T he thesis must be the last sentence in the introductory paragraph.
Additional Comment
QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
QM 28+
improper quote introduction f ormat--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is
in the Research f older in the Inf ormation & Books area of the Blackboard class.
Additional Comment
Check all of your introductions to quotations to make sure you use complete sentences
(independent clauses) and colons as required.
QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation f or each quotation or paraphrase.
Additional Comment
Cite every source every time you use it. Check your paper f or quotations and paraphrases that
are not cited.
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation f or each quotation or paraphrase.
QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
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QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
QM plag
plagiarized
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
PAGE 3
PAGE 4
QM out title
T he title of your essay goes here.
QM ww2
wrong word, dictionary, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I f lashcards on Blackboard
Additional Comment
see me
QM ww2
wrong word, dictionary, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I f lashcards on Blackboard
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QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to f ix the problem.
QM wcp
Your works cited page is not in the correct f ormat.