Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Reviewed by
Husna Amalia Fadilah (0304161021)
State Islamic University of North Sumatera, Indonesia
PBI 6 SEMESTER V
Weakness
1. The measure of score points was not be told perfectly in order to
know how much the maximum and minimum score in the level where
students’ score stand in first journal.
2. In abstract, the writers did not mention the place where they
researched, so the reader have to read all the content.
3. In this journal, researchers did not mention whether the instrument
was valid or not. Because the validity of the instrument greatly
influences the results of the study.
4. The authors did not create the limitations of their study. It will help
the readers what the authors wanted to explain in their journal.
5. The researchers did not explain the tools for processing percentage
data whether using format observation so that it cannot be a reference
for other writers who want to research the same thing.
6. Researcher did not describe the question are and observation detail.
7. Researcher did not tell when they took the research.
8. There is no information when the questions that have been made as
objects of this research are made. This is an example of inaccurate
information.
9. The research did not tell whether all the participants are interviewed
or just a half of sample.
10. The references of journal are less than 20 sources including book or
internet.
11. Journal references’ were not published in early year that makes the
bibliography was up to date. Just one journal is up to date (2016)
Position After analyzing the whole content of the journal, according to me, I
agree with the research journal systematically. I agree that method of
research can be applied by another research because step of research
easily to apply. Then, we know that the result of research conducted
referring to whether that the students gradually respond positively to the
application of authentic assessment.
A Review on
Written by
Triubaida Maya Ardianti, Lutfi Ashar Mauludin
Universitas Airlangga
Reviewed by
Husna Amalia Fadilah (0304161021)
State Islamic University of North Sumatera, Indonesia
PBI 6 SEMESTER V
This is a critical review tended to the study of this research to to discover the
students’ responses if the instructional framework could accommodate their needs in learning
to read in L2 in East Java, Indonesia. Totally, the content of journal has many benefits to
readers. Furthermore, the results of the study will contribute to the teacher. Further, a
qualitative case study is applied, and data are collected from questionnaire and 16 meeting
field-observation. Results of the study indicate that the students gradually respond positively
to the application of authentic assessment. They reveal that authentic assessment (1)
motivates them have a reading routine, so that they can find a lot more vocabulary and get
used to English discourse, (2) trains them to demonstrate their reading comprehension in
more constructive ways such as writing reviews, presentations, and discussions, and (3) helps
them assess their own reading performance. In sum, the students admit that authentic
assessment helps most of them enjoy reading throughout a series of social practices, in this
case, the application of authentic assessment components including portfolios, performance
assessment, and self-assessment.
There are some strengthens in this journal. First, the name of author on the journal is
quite clear. The authors put their email, it allows the readers can be easily criticized directly
to the author. Second, the author’s idea and concept has mentioned clearly and the citation
has been cited was not too much. So, the author’s idea and the citation was balance and the
author’s idea has described transparently, Third, dbstract research consists of 150 words. The
entire content of the journal is very easy to understand with just one time reading, Fourth,
keywords are easier to digest with five words and lead contents of journals. Fifth, the
contents of the journal are in accordance with the title. The use of journal titles is not too long
and efficient. Sixth, the results of the study are described in full and along with explanations
that support the results of the study. Seventh, the author tells the reason why he chose the
topic. Then, the introductory section presented in the journal is very good because it explains
in full from what pedagogy is for teachers to literacy related to clear sources. Next, the
discussion is clear enough to share information to the readers. In addition, the focus of the
research is explained briefly and clearly. Then, literature studies are used quite a lot, both in
Indonesian and English books and also the link addresses that support the discussion. Then,
the introductory section presented in the journal is very good because it explains in full from
what pedagogy is for teachers to literacy related to clear sources. The last, The authors
conclude the results of the interview in more depth and detail.
But some aspects of this journal are missing. This the measure of score points was not
be told perfectly in order to know how much the maximum and minimum score in the level
where students’ score stand in first journal. Then, in abstract, the writers did not mention the
place where they researched, so the readers have to read all the content. Also, in this journal,
researchers did not mention whether the instrument was valid or not because the validity of
the instrument greatly influences the results of the study. Furthermore, The authors did not
create the limitations of their study. It will help the readers what the authors wanted to
explain in their journal. Then, the authors did not create the limitations of their study. It will
help the readers what the authors wanted to explain in their journal. In the same way, The
researchers did not explain the tools for processing percentage data whether using format
observation so that it cannot be a reference for other writers who want to research the same
thing. Researcher did not describe the question are and observation detail and did not tell
when they took the research. In addition, there is no information when the questions that have
been made as objects of this research are made. This is an example of inaccurate information.
Then, The research did not tell whether all the participants are interviewed or just a half of
sample. Finally, The references of journal are less than 20 sources including book or internet.
Journal references’ were not published in early year that makes the bibliography was up to
date. Just one journal is up to date (2016).
After analyzing the whole content of the journal, according to me, I agree with the
research journal systematically. I agree that method of research can be applied by another
research because step of research easily to apply. Then, we know that the result of research
conducted referring to whether that the students gradually respond positively to the
application of authentic assessment.