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PERSUASIVE ESSAY

Specific topic​: Should Thai game center prohibit student uniform


Outline
I.​ ​Introduction
A. General statement
B. Thesis statement
II. Body
A. The student doesn’t go to school
B. Evidence (Supported)
C. The student failed exam / expelled from school.
D. Evidence (Supported)
III. Conclusion
A. General statement

Essay
Should Thai game center prohibit student uniform?

T​ he "game" is now accepted by more adults. Till the games get promoted the "E-Sport
competition.” The gamer has a well managing with the game and also the time, that made
them become a great player. But, many kids that want to be the gamer, they go to a place
called “game center” that have video game and playing till they become game addiction instead
of the gamer. ​The game center should prohibit student uniform to protect the future life of
the kids.

When you walk on the street in Thailand. You can usually see these kids or teenagers that
wear the uniform, they are sitting on the chair and stare at the computer concentratedly. They
have skipped the school to play the game or in other word is addicted to games (Chomnapas
W., 2018 May 23). The game is affected to the front brain of children and adolescents, which
are the part that responsible for thinking, analyzing, meditating, and making decisions. Affects
control of the mind. Emotions and behavior This brain will work down. While the brain that
wants to be called the “limbic system” will work more when stimulated with craving, fun,
excitement, and challenge from playing games continuously. Finally, It will lead to the brain that
addicted to games.

Therefore, the student that always skipped the classes for the games, when they have an
exam they couldn’t do it and then they fail the exam because they lack knowledge (Noojidsai,
2011 July 03). The student is doesn’t care with their study because they put their all effort into
the games. This problem is also affecting their daily life because they think of the game is
important to their life. When these students addicted to the game, they also become lazy to do
the work or any activities such as homework, house cleaning, even bathing. Moreover, they
could get expelled from school (Amy M., 2017 July 24). Because of the game that has violence
content and they assimilate it. After that their behavior will change based on the game played,
and they could commit an offense. For example, stealing, abuse, assault, or even murder. The
student, who has become an aggressive person could get fired from the school and they will
don’t have any future for their adult age.

If Thailand still leaves this problem behind and doesn’t solve it, the next generation of the
student will be alway looped like this forever.

References

Chomnapas W. 2018 May 23. Thai kids addicted to games. ​Retrieved from
​ ttp://www.thaihealth.or.th/Content/36803-เด็กไทย%20เสพติดเกม.htm
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Noojidsai 2011 July 03. ​8 reasons why Thai student get low grade. Retrieved from
​https://webboard.sanook.com/forum/?topic=3456178

Amy M. 2017 July 24. ​Do Violent Video Games Really Lead to Aggressive Behavior? Retrieved
from
​https://www.verywellfamily.com/aggressive-behavior-and-video-games-1094980

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