Professional Documents
Culture Documents
**more becomes
Confusing.
Sentence Tips
Examine your copy to
make sure you vary the
sentence length –but aim
for 15-20 words per
sentence. If you use the
same length sentences, the
text becomes tedious
(tiresome) to read
Conciseness Tips
Avoid the repeated use of
pronouns, this confuses the
reader. Only use a pronoun
immediately following the noun
it represents. Try to use specific
nouns such as the person’s
name, or the specific piece of
equipment, etc. In place of
abstract nouns
Conciseness Tips
Focus on
strong verbs!
Assess Develop
Classify Eliminate
Compute Require
Conciseness Tips
Shorten wordy phrases
Replace long words with short ones
Leave out clichés ( an expression that
has been overused to the extent that it
loses its original meaning or novelty).
Cut out extra words that are redundant
or no longer needed.
Language Use Tips
Distinguish facts from opinions
Revised:
• “The levy pass through long
and hard work.”
“Confirmation of the voting
results occurred yesterday.”
Revised
“The voting results were
confirmed yesterday.”
Technical Writing
Provides clear
communication in the
workplace