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Writing an essay-
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Introduction
Thesis S
Reason #3 / Other
point of view +
Reason #1 Reason #2 Negation of it
(Topic S) (Topic S) (Topic S)
Conclusion
= Transitions
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Introduction
General Statement
(Attention grabber)
Limit the sentence
Thesis Statement
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Introduction
Ways To Grab Attention :
Thesis Statement
Main idea in an essay( Central idea) + writers point view
e.g. :
Statement : Competition exists in every sphere of life.
Mass media is becoming popular in India
Donts :
Do not say what you are going to do- let your writing show it. I make an
attempt to
Do not start with I agree , According to me, yes, I personally believe.
Dos:
Body Paragraphs
Body P 1
Body P 2
Body P3
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Body Paragraph 1
Topic sentence ( the most important reason that supports your Thesis
statement) 1
THESIS : Mass Media plays a responsible role in a democratic country like India.
Mass media can become a unifying force at times of crisis. For instance, during
the terrorist attack on Mumbai ,television channels created a sense of patriotism
among people across India. The coverage of the attack by English, Hindi and the
local channels reached every corner of India. The nation, as a whole, raised voice
against terrorists and this gave a sense of belonging to the people of Mumbai. As
a result, people at least in Mumbai felt the need to overcome religious and
regional differences. For once, the Indian media was able to create an awareness
among the people that they need to fight the enemy together.
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Body Paragraph 2
Media besides being a unifying force, also acts as a source of information and a
means to achieve justice in India. At times of natural disasters or accidents, media
assumes an important role in providing necessary information and help to the
people. In fact, India managed to cope with the aftermaths of Tsunami a few years
ago mainly due to the initiative of the media. Again, in the anticorruption
movement led by Anna Hazare the Indian media was able to create an awareness
even among the illiterate people. Further, media often served people as a platform
to seek justice. A number of cases on child abuse or violence against women are
taken up by the media in India to this end. In short, mass media in India is certainly
a strong option for someone who needs either information or justice.
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Body Paragraph 3
THESIS : Mass Media plays a responsible role in a democratic country like India
This strength of Media ,as a source of information, is cited often as its bane by a
few. It is pointed out that media creates hype on issues and prejudices people in the
name of information. Indeed, media was criticized both in the case of Mumbai
attack and supporting Hazare for these very reasons. However, a careful analysis
would reveal that is not true in every case. No media can survive just by creating
hype alone and it needs to be responsible sooner or later. Moreover, people have
access to different modes of communication today to be misled by the media. In a
fiercely competitive world of media, survival would demand a sense of
responsibility and honesty. The players of mass media in India know this well and
are playing it right.
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Transitions
Idea hooks- hook the idea used in the last sentence of the
previous paragraph to a new idea of the first
sentence.
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Conclusion
Conclusion
Summary
Statement
Implications of S
Final (clincher)
Statement
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Conclusion
Summary Statement:
Donts :
Dos:
Reinforce the main idea using a logical connection/ refer back to beginning idea
e.g: Life is full of competitions and there is no point in running away from it.
The best way would be to learn from our failures and win the next time.
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Conclusion
Use a clincher
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Conclusion
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General Instructions
Donts:
General Instructions
Dos:
Five paragraphs
Thesis Statement
Topic Sentences
Use transitions to connect
Space between paragraphs
Catchy beginning and a clincher